That Guy Matt Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 http://www.blacklibrary.com/new-titles/new-feat/in-service-eternal-eshort.html I wrote a story. It came out a couple of weeks ago. Thought some of you might be interested. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarKnight Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 http://www.blacklibrary.com/new-titles/new-feat/in-service-eternal-eshort.html I wrote a story. It came out a couple of weeks ago. Thought some of you might be interested. Awesome man, congrats! I'll definitely be reading! Is this your first BL work? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547758 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkChaplain Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 Gotta be honest, knowing its from "one of us" makes me want to bump it up in the priority list. I also forgot to add it to Goodreads, my bad. Fixing that now. Congrats on getting published, buddy! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547779 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 Wow congratulations!!! Did you won the contest? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547783 Share on other sites More sharing options...
veterannoob Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 Grats man! I'll move it up in the pile. ...but the pile is still over 150 works to go... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547786 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkChaplain Posted October 29, 2016 Share Posted October 29, 2016 I feel your pain. My bedside table is overflowing already and there's various sequels to stuff I want to read coming out in the next few months. It is like a convergence of heaven and hell. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547799 Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Guy Matt Posted October 29, 2016 Author Share Posted October 29, 2016 http://www.blacklibrary.com/new-titles/new-feat/in-service-eternal-eshort.html I wrote a story. It came out a couple of weeks ago. Thought some of you might be interested. Awesome man, congrats! I'll definitely be reading! Is this your first BL work? Yeah. Wow congratulations!!! Did you won the contest? I passed through an open submission window last year. Thanks for the kind words. I hope those of you who read it enjoy it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4547843 Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeritorA Posted October 31, 2016 Share Posted October 31, 2016 http://www.blacklibrary.com/new-titles/new-feat/in-service-eternal-eshort.html I wrote a story. It came out a couple of weeks ago. Thought some of you might be interested. Awesome man, congrats! I'll definitely be reading! Is this your first BL work? Yeah. Wow congratulations!!! Did you won the contest? I passed through an open submission window last year. Thanks for the kind words. I hope those of you who read it enjoy it. Congrats! It get me thinking of some scenes from Independence Day (from which you took the inspiration I'm sure). So, I would be the first to provide some critic :) Story was good from the actions point of view, but too blank and uninspiring from the point of prose. I do understand that you are not Abnett (yet :) ) - but still some comparing, details, events, depictions and definitely dialogs should have been done 'better' Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4549166 Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Guy Matt Posted October 31, 2016 Author Share Posted October 31, 2016 Thanks for reading. It's funny you should mention Independence Day. In my first pitch and first draft I wasn't thinking about the film at all, but two editors who looked at it both mentioned it. One saying be less Independence Day and the other said be more, which I found funny. Thanks for the feedback too. I definitely think I could do better. Hopefully I get a chance to try. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4549213 Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeritorA Posted October 31, 2016 Share Posted October 31, 2016 Thanks for reading. It's funny you should mention Independence Day. In my first pitch and first draft I wasn't thinking about the film at all, but two editors who looked at it both mentioned it. One saying be less Independence Day and the other said be more, which I found funny. Thanks for the feedback too. I definitely think I could do better. Hopefully I get a chance to try. I know you will - and Empra bless you on your writer road ahead Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4549229 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Augustus Posted November 1, 2016 Share Posted November 1, 2016 Thanks for reading. It's funny you should mention Independence Day. In my first pitch and first draft I wasn't thinking about the film at all, but two editors who looked at it both mentioned it. One saying be less Independence Day and the other said be more, which I found funny. Thanks for the feedback too. I definitely think I could do better. Hopefully I get a chance to try. You probably hit the sweetspot then :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4550414 Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Guy Matt Posted November 2, 2016 Author Share Posted November 2, 2016 Haha I hope so. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4552074 Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeritorA Posted November 7, 2016 Share Posted November 7, 2016 Haha I hope so. We hope so too. I for once love to fly and adorne aerial/space combat - so want more for sure ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/327360-in-service-eternal/#findComment-4555947 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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