Outrider 3d concept

[Wisper]

So, it's been a while since I have been on here or even thought about 40k. I have decided to start back up. I started working on an outrider for my new army. Thought I would share an image and get feedback.

 

[Dr_Ruminahui]

I'm not sure I like the triangles, particularly the one next to the symbol, as it crowds it and the lines of the two next to each other aren't very aesthetically pleasing.  To a lesser extent, I think the top triangle also crowds the small rectangle, and should be a slight bit further back.

 

Otherwise it looks great, though from the angle you provided its hard to really evaluate the helmet and backpack.  What's the symbol on the side of the bike?

[Wisper]

The Triangle is the Company Marker, there will be a roman numeral for squad, and will be the company color. The symbol is my chapter marker. Here is a closer on the pack and helmet. And here is a poorly done AI concept render, mostly to visualize the  paint scheme.

 

Edited yesterday at 01:59 PM by Wisper

[Cleon]

The flat at the top smaller triangle on the coloured render is definitely a winner over the flat at the bottom one, it much better complements the curve of the round chapter logo.

[Wisper]

Here is a updated model