Shadow Talons - part one - Verdantia

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Many years ago, when I first started getting into Warhammer, my daughter thought it was cool and wanted to be a part of it too, but didn't like the girl stories.  I said I'd come up with something for her.  Six years later, I've finished the prequel and she has well and truely moved on...  Anyways.  The Shadow Talons is in two parts, this is the first.  It starts in M25 and is suppose to be around the culture of the home world that seeds the culture of the Shadow Talons.  There's a few canon challenges, especially in part two, but I've tried to find the gaps and weave things through.  Keen to get your opinions, let me know where I've pushed to far or have completely busted canon.  If I've done it right, it should be here as an ePub download.

Shadow Talons - 1 - Verdantia.epub