undividwill Posted June 4, 2005 Share Posted June 4, 2005 Once there was a chapter almost unknown with a corupt leader, before him it was uncorrupt and a glorius chapter, untill betrayel and death......... The glorius chapter master of the holy crusade chapter was aproud man his first company leader was not.... the company master accepted the cll of chaos his armour had daemonic runes know imbedded in the armour and hid body was mutated he almost had the same armour as horus he betrayed his master slew him in the night and took his place as master........ he stole the chapters holy things and destroyed them and turned his warriors into the corrupt ways of abadon and changed there name to the black crusade. He was accepted into the high lords, and was right were he needed to be he atacked many imperial gaurd bases and sloly destroyed the planets and then he was allmighty they eventualy found him out and sent him away, on his way to his ship he culled many loyalist marines and flew away.......... to wreck havoc al through the commen simple minds of the Emperor!! so wat do u think? is it ^_^ enough or is it really ;) no mater what please tell me your thoughts> ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undividwill Posted June 4, 2005 Author Share Posted June 4, 2005 iiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeddddddddddd replies from know on if u read this forum reply! or just say goood\bad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infrared Posted June 4, 2005 Share Posted June 4, 2005 Ok, your story is that the Chapter master was betrayed and murdered by his second in command, who turned the Chapter to Chaos and than infiltrated the High Lords (?)... (I didnt get that last part) Maybe it feels a bit (just a bit) similar to the whole Horus/Emperor story, but what hasn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undividwill Posted June 4, 2005 Author Share Posted June 4, 2005 Ok, your story is that the Chapter master was betrayed and murdered by his second in command, who turned the Chapter to Chaos and than infiltrated the High Lords (?)... (I didnt get that last part) Maybe it feels a bit (just a bit) similar <{POST_SNAPBACK}> he was accepted into the high lords before they found out he was with chaos and you got the other bits right though! so any one else? :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 4, 2005 Share Posted June 4, 2005 What do you mean accepted into the high lords? Do you mean became a high lord? If so, this is a bit of a high profile job so we probably would have heard of him. Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undividwill Posted June 4, 2005 Author Share Posted June 4, 2005 What do you mean accepted into the high lords? Do you mean became a high lord? If so, this is a bit of a high profile job so we probably would have heard of him. Ferrata <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Sorry what i mean is he high lords new of him not very highly but they new of him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepwalker Posted June 4, 2005 Share Posted June 4, 2005 Okay, lets work with this... To turn a marine traitor is quite a task. To turn a chapter traitor is even harder. For the second in command to take control of the chapter will take more than just killing the chapter master- he would need to have the support of all of his fellow marines. Perhaps he starts to spread rumours about the chapter master, that he is really a follower of the chaos gods, and turns the chapter against him. Then he slowly corrupts the marines around him. The Inquisition (and thereby the High Lords) are told of the chapter master's treachery and inspect the chapter for further taint but find none... their decent into chaos is not nearly pronounced enough. To all intents and purposes they act normally for a next few decades, whilst inside their minds and souls are slowly corrupted. They are able to prey on unsuspecting human civilisations whilst claiming that they the men they are killing are traitors. Only the new chapter master knows the truth, his men and the inquisition cannot see it. It is when they start to change physically, or perhaps the inquisition starts to suspect something, that they finally turn to chaos. their minds, now fully corrupted, show them for what they really are, looters, pillagers, murderers. They are not defenders of humanity, they only live to see its downfall. The High Lords, taken in by their treachery, order an exterminatus upon them but they fly away on their battle barges into the eye of terror. Now you just need to decide what turned the second in command, and how he persuaded the others to follow him. Perhaps the whispering call of Tzeentch- he is a sneaky devil that Changer of Ways. Then just sort out some names for you chapter pre and post change. There you go, lots of stuff to think about. :huh: Oh, and for extra reference, check out Mr Aurelius Rex's thread on Renegade DIY chapters- it might help you along in the right direction: http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/forums/...26entry766326 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undividwill Posted June 30, 2005 Author Share Posted June 30, 2005 Well any more ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 Well any more ideas? This thread died 4 weeks ago. So take note what was said, and come back with a new thread with more information in it. Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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