FireN.Brimstone Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 You might want to redo the first bit as you've used Chapter instead of Company several times. You seem to have lots of dreadnoguhts, 20 if I count correctly, which Im sure is more than some of the 1st Founding chapters. Besides that, looks good :devil: Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FireN.Brimstone Posted July 1, 2005 Author Share Posted July 1, 2005 The chapter is a Scion of Mars chapter, thus the large population of Dreadnaughts. And thanks for the catch, going to change it now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 I'm not sure even the Iron Hands have that many, and you dont get much more mechanical than them! Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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