BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 Chapter Master: Michael Von Wenzel Chief Librarian: Animus Orbitus Colours Of The Chapter: Red Armour, and Company Colour. Chapter Name: =I= Unknown =I= Traits Displayed By The Chapter: Trust Your Battle Brothers, Cleanse And Purify, Aspire To Glory, and Death Before Dishonour. HomeWorld: =I= Uknown. =I= Please Help Me Create This Chapter bettery by giving them more fluff. Also, Asking Questions On The Chapter Helps As Well As Advice. :P ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 Well to help you we need more info. like; How old is your chapter, whats their attitude? beliefs? who is their nemesis?, why were they created? are you having a theme? These are some of the things you need to give us so we can help knit it together with you. We can help you with a chapter but not create it for you otherwise it would not be your own and you will never be happy :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iron Warrior w/ Servo Arm Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 Wha? You want us to write the fluff for this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 The Chapter is Newly Founded. Their Atitude is : They Believe in Courage, Honesty, Honour, and Justice. They Respect Strength, and the Virtues of a Noble Warrior, and by that same system of beliefs, they utterly despise any weakness, and will kill a coward or a liar. They tend to REALLY dislike most inquisitors, and as such, they will try to avoid dealing with inquisitors in most cases, unless the Inquisitor proves that they are Trustworthy. They have a Tendancy to Favor using Librarians as Leaders in Battle, similar to the Blood Ravens in their Tactics of Finding out info about their opponent. As they are newly founded, They do not normally employ Terminator Armor, Or Dreadnoughts. They have Very Friendly Relationships with the Blood Ravens and Imperial Fists, Blood Angels, Space Wolves, UltraMarines, and many other chapters. They Generally dislike Dark Angels, Crimson Fists, Salamanders, and are neutral towards many other chapters. Similar to the Salamanders, they commonly have their Marines with the Populations of their recruiting worlds, and their Marines often assist the people there in their worlds, and Engage in many Social activites, for many reasons, including bonds with the people. As they are newly founded, they do not currently have Banners designed yet. Their Chapter Symbol is Based on the Chapter Master's Initials, stylized in the form of a Bat : V M = Chapter Symbol. Although their Chapter's Primarch is unknown, there are speculations that they are descended from either: Guillliman, Dorn, or Sanguinius . The Master Chaplain of the Chapter's Name is unknown currently. How is that? Feel Free to ask whatever else about them. They were created to deal mainly with Aliens and Chaos. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Wha? You want us to write the fluff for this? <{POST_SNAPBACK}> No, but Helpful Suggestions, Comments, Opinions, and Questions help Me with the Fluff, such as if you asked a specific Question about the Chapter or Army. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 Okay lets try and help ya' expand ^_^ Their Atitude is : They Believe in Courage, Honesty, Honour, and Justice. They Respect Strength, and the Virtues of a Noble Warrior, and by that same system of beliefs, they utterly despise any weakness, and will kill a coward or a liar. They tend to REALLY dislike most inquisitors, and as such, they will try to avoid dealing with inquisitors in most cases, unless the Inquisitor proves that they are Trustworthy.Sounds like a standard marine chapter ;) . You could perhaps play on not liking the inquisition even if they prove themselves. They have a Tendancy to Favor using Librarians as Leaders in Battle, similar to the Blood Ravens in their Tactics of Finding out info about their opponent. Ok so perhaps a lot of psychics They have Very Friendly Relationships with the Blood Ravens and Imperial Fists, Blood Angels, Space Wolves, UltraMarines, and many other chapters. They Generally dislike Dark Angels, Crimson Fists, Salamanders, and are neutral towards many other chapters.Why do they dislike the last three chapters? and why do they get on with the others? Perhaps they were involved in similar campaigns or were aided however its unusual for sallies to be disliked but that it up to the chapters tastes :P Similar to the Salamanders, they commonly have their Marines with the Populations of their recruiting worlds, and their Marines often assist the people there in their worlds, and Engage in many Social activites, for many reasons, including bonds with the people. Okay so they mix freely with their populace. Do you have a name for your homeworld? What kind of culture/stage of development are they at? Are they like cavemen, or in the iron age, industrial, feudal? Some nice ideas now just to expand a little and filter the good stuff from the mixed stuff ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Okay lets try and help ya' expand ^_^ Sounds like a standard marine chapter ^_^ . You could perhaps play on not liking the inquisition even if they prove themselves. That idea is scrapped, as they are a New Chapter, so that might not make sense, although they still distrust the Inquisitors. Ok so perhaps a lot of psychics In Battle, they Take Librarians As Leaders. Why do they dislike the last three chapters? and why do they get on with the others? Perhaps they were involved in similar campaigns or were aided however its unusual for sallies to be disliked but that it up to the chapters tastes :P They Like the Imperial Fists , and although they like the Black Templars, they Dislike the Crimson Fists, from dealings with their people. They Dislike The Dark Angels, since they also had dealings with them, where they rather disliked some of the commanders there. Same for the Salamanders. Sort of like Vendetta's between the Commanders, in alot of those cases. Okay so they mix freely with their populace. Do you have a name for your homeworld? What kind of culture/stage of development are they at? Are they like cavemen, or in the iron age, industrial, feudal? ** Various, though Middle Ages and Feral Worlds are where they prefer to recruit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 I would perhaps leave out the stuff about hating other chapters as they are a bit random. Unless you can think of deeper meanings then I wouldn't add that into the fluff. So do they have a homeworld or are they fleet based. Also are you going to have a theme through your army? I also suggest checking this site to get a grasp on what you need Liber DIY help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Yeah, I should probably remove that from their Fluff, although if they did, it would be personal reasons. So that Fluff is Scrapped also. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Also, their Gene Seed is Most Likely from Rogal Dorn, or Robute Guilliman. I chose those since: They are Awesome Primarchs, and also: Guilliman: His Chapters have Pure GeneSeed. Dorn: Animus Orbitus is from Imperial Fists Chapter. I made up his name and character, but that is where he is from. I dont really dislike the Acid and Hybernation issue though, so thats why Guilliman is probably more likely. Could it be possible for them to spit Acid and Sleep, in any way, since it said Imperial Fists Dont Do That Anymore? ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 Remember you can simply edit posts ^_^ No Imperial fists can no longer spit acid IIRC but yes marines can sleep :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Remember you can simply edit posts ^_^ No Imperial fists can no longer spit acid IIRC but yes marines can sleep :P <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I meant about the Hybernation. ^_^ ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domitius Posted July 3, 2005 Share Posted July 3, 2005 The hibernation as in being able to rest half their brain and remain conscious? (like a dolphin :P ) I don't know what that issue is, can't imp fists do that? Now if only i could find my old marine codex (3rd edition) and remember/find out name of that implant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 3, 2005 Author Share Posted July 3, 2005 Imperial Fists Dont Spit Acid or Hybernate anymore. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted July 4, 2005 Share Posted July 4, 2005 If you want your chapter to be Fists successors, you have to take everything that entails. That means no Sus-an Membrane or Betcher's Gland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 4, 2005 Author Share Posted July 4, 2005 What do you think of the name: Blood Wolves? Btw, The Marines are Descended from Imperial Fists. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 6, 2005 Author Share Posted July 6, 2005 How are some of these names? : Blood Star Blood Hammer Bright Star Blood Wolves How are some of those names for the Chapter? ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 6, 2005 Share Posted July 6, 2005 Well is there any significance behind the name? and more particularly the term blood? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 6, 2005 Author Share Posted July 6, 2005 I like Vampires, and Vampires are cool. The Chapter is Descended from Rogal Dorn though. ::cuss: ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 6, 2005 Share Posted July 6, 2005 That doesn't matter. You could say that they recruit from a planet that is similar to that of the times of vampires (i.e Vlad the Impaler) and that they have some bizarre rituals like the Mortifactors :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 6, 2005 Author Share Posted July 6, 2005 Also, why do they call the Blood Ravens that, if they arent descended from Blood Angels? ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted July 6, 2005 Share Posted July 6, 2005 Also, why do they call the Blood Ravens that, if they arent descended from Blood Angels? Because its a pretty cool name. Im sure IA had a whole discussion on this Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 6, 2005 Author Share Posted July 6, 2005 Either way, what do you think about the Names? Also, feel free to suggest some names. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted July 6, 2005 Share Posted July 6, 2005 Well if your going for a Vampire theme then terms like star and wolves dont spring to mind. Perhaps work with the terms blood or perhaps even look at some Vampire-esk novels for some inspiration :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrightStarNova Posted July 9, 2005 Author Share Posted July 9, 2005 Characters I Made, Though Some Of Them Still Need To Get Names: Chapter Master: Michael Von Wenzel Chief Librarian: Animus Orbitus Chief Chaplain: Unknown 2nd Company Librarian: Unknown 2nd Company Chaplain: Unknown 2nd Company Captain: Unknown. Any suggestions on Good Places For Making Names? Also, Each Name Is supposed to have Special Meaning To The Name. An Example: Animus Orbitus= Soul Reaver. ** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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