terror bunny Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 I pretty much started this yesterday and dont have that much so i'm looking to build this chapter around the AA project. Name - Blades of Montu (Warrior God) Founding - 12th Geneseed - Unknown Homeworld - Nubia Combat Doctrine - Close Assault Traits - Undecided Colours - Predominantly SW Grey, black helms and shoulder pad insets, Gold trim. Current Master - Sefu IIV HomeWorld:- Nubia The planet is close to its sun which would be deadly to the inhabitants if it were not for the six Moons which orbit Nubia, these orbiting shields give some respite to population who only have to suffer 4 hour days in the stiffling heat. The rest of the time is spent in a strange Twilight given off by the Moons. Between the heat and the darkness has left Nubia as a seemingly barren desert, although in truth there is an abundance of wildlife and plants that have evolved to survive in such conditions. TO BE CONTINUED......... any suggestions would be welcome. :devil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 We'll have to wait for the monkey boys (aka: the AA monkeys) for some view from them (for what its worth). /insulting Neph & loki. Otherwise I'll be in this airlock till christmas :devil: Not much to comment on really. (read: write more) Ferrata :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 *A monkey comes crashing in* Sounding good so far you just need to expand it. Perhaps write down little basics for the other categories and expand. But well written so far ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Librarian Akritedes Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Agree with the "write more" crowd. Although, I did have one question. By "IIV" I assume you mean the number three, only in roman numerals? If so, the "correct" form would be "III". ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gator_of_Bahamut Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Montu eh? I don't suppose you're a roller coaster fan who has recently visited Bush Gardens, Tampa Bay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DraXaus Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 The idea is different, but I don't understand how all six moons could eclipse the sun, every day? I would like to here more on this idea, but maybe an explenation, as not to confuse such simple minds as myself. *Shoots monkey with B.B Gun* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gator_of_Bahamut Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Simple, all of them complete at least one full orbit of the plaent a day. They must be moving pretty fast! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DraXaus Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Still a bit off to me, but I guess it could work. Anyways, you could have something happen when all the moons re-aline, like earth quakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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