Eetion Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 Ok so i got the plastic commander box for an Alpha Legion conversion, Ok i built the model anyway, Ok I want to build my own chapter, Ok i know im shallow and have no staying power. Having very little experience with loyalist chapter i thought id post my background, let me know what you think, where can i improve and what traits you think would be appropriate. Enquiry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 Doesnt seem to be much wrong with it. Maybe a more IA article approach would make it flow better. I would watch the homeworld name, I can see many people using that as a name. Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 As Ferrata said, there's nothing especially wrong with your chapter, which is probably why you've not received many comments. They seem like a good, characterful chapter. I look forward to any more work you put into them. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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