nowfearthis Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 I have been wrestling with this for awhile and I cannot come up with good fluff for them as BA successors looking down on there own heritage, to make them outcasts with the BA's and there other successors. Now what I have been looking into and saw a discussion about it on the SW page was making them a renegade or traitor companie of Space wolves that at some point in time recanted their oaths of feilty. I think I could come up with some good fluff for this and make it tie into either the heresey or one of the Dark crusades. Any Ideas, I am still tossing them both around, I just want there to be a good solid fluff behind them and if the BA stuff cannot workout then I may go with the SW option. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 You've come here several times and changed your ideas many more times than that. I personally think that you have a very strong, characterful and unique chapter idea with the idea of Blood Angels that hate their curse and try to distance themselves from their heritage. I think you'd have much better fluff with that than a Space Wolves great company that recants its' oaths of fealty. That said, you'll only ever write decent fluff if you're passionate about an idea. You need to find an idea you're passionate about, that you're willing to put lots of work into. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964634 Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted August 29, 2005 Author Share Posted August 29, 2005 The problem is I am stuck, I am trying to find a way to justify there hatred of the curse and non favorible look towards there own geneseed, but to be quite honest everything I have come up with so far for that has been cr@% so, i was just exploreing options. I love the BA idea and everything else for it flows I am just stuck. The SW idea was just as a plan B if I could not work things out. I could really use some help and input on the original idea. Most of the other changes have been done mainly after I had been corrected on fluff no-no's. The only other issue I had was hammering out what founding they were because i do not want to take the easy way out with 13th or 21st, but I do want them to be an older founding. I order the BA codex and am still waiting for it to see if I can get more insight from it. But I am stationed oversee's and military mail system is VERY slow. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 Well, you don't need some grand and decisive moment in the history of your chapter that suddenly causes a huge shift in your chapter's thoughts. That's a little clich Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964673 Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted August 29, 2005 Author Share Posted August 29, 2005 This is true, I will try and make a go of that angle, since they are a warrior based medeival society...will sit down and hammer some ideas out and post them later, would appreciate it greatly if you could give me some feed back on it once i do. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964725 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 Never a problem :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964726 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DraXaus Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 Yeah, it's no problem at all. I have to say your chapter is coming out nicely from once I first read it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/83289-blood-jackals/#findComment-964773 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.