juckto Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 1405 words, my machine tells me. About 2 and a half pages. ====================================================== PURGATION Dedicated to daeothar, for lighting my path ;) Holding the struggling creature by the scruff of its neck, Kaiyt drew the knife across it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient_Galatan Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 :) WOW that is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StormDragon Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Very nice story. I could have sworn Kaiyt was going to win the duel :) Edit: I've just checked out what the third lung and occulube do. I say GW don't seem to mind contradicting thier fluff so why should you. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wulfgarr Posted September 4, 2005 Share Posted September 4, 2005 That was great.I don't feel there is anything that needs to be changed.I really like how you portrayed how the marines deal with challenges (arguments) within the chapter,and what happens to the defeated.I hope to be able to read more about this chapter,who ever they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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