skrob Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 this thread be dead. made a new one with a new, revised history, etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Seems like a really good start -_- Now all you need to do is put it into a better format. Add lots more, and spend the rest of your gaming days adding more :) Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 2, 2005 Author Share Posted September 2, 2005 Would a point form setup be a better way to lay it out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Do you have access to an IA atricle (Either from on of the WD or the IA books). If so, check that format, thats probably the best way to go. Unless your fancy doing something a bit different. Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 2, 2005 Author Share Posted September 2, 2005 I do not have access to one of the IA articles sadly. When I get home I'm sure I can whip up something a little more user friendly though if I fail to find one. Thanks for the suggestion. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 I'll give you the headers which the IA articles are written under Origins Home world Combat Doctrine Organisation Beliefs Gene-seed Battle-cry Ferrata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Sounds good. As I mentioned in another post this may help you with examples of how to expand Have a look at SCC's Brazen claws for a good example of what to do Brazen Claws And Liber how to Liber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 Thanks alot, both of you! -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 welcome to the brotherhood of the jackal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 welcome to the brotherhood of the jackal. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Pardon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 to my knowledge there are only 3-4 of us out there using chapters with the name Jackal in it. My is the Blood Jackals, a Blood Angel successor, but i used a more south american tribe theme with them though in regards to being into blood rituals, I think the posting is on page 7 here with my revised fluff if you want to read it. Good luck and welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 Oh, right on, and thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 sorry page 7 is were the fluff is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nowfearthis Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 Have you got your basic idea for your fluff. Major conflicts..... Character names....etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 Not quite yet. I came up with that little bit today at work and haven't had much time to expand upon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 I can't seem to figure out what founding, if any is the closest to the end of the Age of Apostasy, which is when I would like my DIY to have been founded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 UPDATED FIRST POST Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 Technically your reasoning for the chapter is a bit tenuous. You speak of how 'No man should have so much power' but the Ecclesiarch had less power than say... Horus. Also, you metnion how the chapter should look beyond the squabbles between church and state. You have to understand that nearly every single marine chapter stayed neutral during the Age of Apostasy. It was only when Earth was besieged by the Templars and others that the marines were truly involved. The Ecclesiarchy has always hated the marines, because they're heretics, and the most bombastic of cardinals could easily consider the marines to be frighteningly inhuman monsters. When the clashes between the Administratum and the Ministorum began, marines sat out - so I don't think you can say that the Jackals are the only 'objective' chapter. Just my thoughts, use them as you wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 Yeah, that kind of dawned on me as I was writing this last night. Back to the drawing board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 4, 2005 Author Share Posted September 4, 2005 Made an edit to the first post. Incase you missed it, I'd like to ask if someone could list the known foundings along with their dates. Thankyou. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted September 4, 2005 Share Posted September 4, 2005 If you'd checked the stickies.... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skrob Posted September 4, 2005 Author Share Posted September 4, 2005 Argh. I'm an idiot. It's like...my super power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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