Baron Jac l'aire Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 [The Fire Dragoons Are Of Knightly Blood And Up Hold Honour And Truth When Ever Able, Withe The Combined Force Of Their Drake Dragoons and The Skillful Brother Assassin, Along With Other Unique Units There Is No Stoping Then On The Path Of Honour! Any Question About This Loyal Of Forces Post And The Question Shall Be Answered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 I think you need to give some more info as currently it seems... very... strange :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Jac l'aire Posted September 6, 2005 Author Share Posted September 6, 2005 Well what would you like to know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Jac l'aire Posted September 6, 2005 Author Share Posted September 6, 2005 The Unique Units, The Drake Dragoons, are in all respects bikers, yet due to the rough terrain bikes can't be used so the next best thing is used (the work horse of the home world) drakes, whihc are horse sized lizards which are captured and trained by the fire dragoons for the use of a quick flanking unit. The Brother Assassin is the most secret of all the fire dragoons and is only called upon by the baron of the realm in times of great need. The Brother Miners, are traitors, conspirator and order breakers that have been sent down the deep crystal mines of Tron-egel for punishment, as in the eyes of the fire dragoons killing such a useful thing as a marine seems wrong. The Knights of The Realm, are again a secretive collection of marines all bareing terminators armour and armed with deadly power weapons, the are the terror and the bringers of truth for every barons force. There are many more units that have not been spoken about (due to me forgetting there back grounds but i will try and remember) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Jac l'aire Posted September 6, 2005 Author Share Posted September 6, 2005 How old are they? They are 11th founding. Are they Fleet or Planet based? They are planet based on a volcanic world called Tron-egel Combat doctrine - Are they close combat, shooty,balanced? Due to the Organisation of the force it is balanced and split into Anti-infantry, Anti-armour and Close combat. Theme - Knightly, french. Gene-seed - Salamander Loyalist? Renegades that are still loyal. Any thing else? They dont use the space marine codex rules instead they use the chaos codex so they can have different units, yet i still count them as loyalist!!! What do you guys think upto now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimmythemoose Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 Looks alright so far, although the loyalist renegades is getting slightly overused. Next you should try and pad out the fluff using the subtitles from Gws IA articles: Origins Homeworld Combat doctrine Organisation Beliefs Geneseed Battlecry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the-betrayer Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 Good to sse you finally here Baron, but as jimmythemoose said, get all the detail you can on here for people to see. Peace :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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