calgar101 Posted August 10, 2010 Author Share Posted August 10, 2010 We'll soon see tomorrow, if it fits in context, i plan to do 2 chapters tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Delayed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted August 17, 2010 Share Posted August 17, 2010 clearly <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 17, 2010 Author Share Posted August 17, 2010 Been busy-ish with lots of things and even though its already written on paper(probably needs tweaking in places) i have not really been bothered to put it on here yet. I've gone ahead and written idea's for further chapters, expanded upon cool idea's i've thought of or from pictures or extracts i have read. Also im reading the HH books i have not read so i dont miss out any major fluff and also trying to remember characters from earlier in my story and the HH novels that are alive ect etc! Â Perhaps i will add tonight, who knows <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted August 17, 2010 Share Posted August 17, 2010 smart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 17, 2010 Author Share Posted August 17, 2010 Here is my Oath of Moment to you readers that by Midnight tomorrow the next chapter will be up. Also depending on things i may add 2... but one for definite! Â Thanks for bearing with me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Captain Ming Posted August 18, 2010 Share Posted August 18, 2010 Oath noted and recorded, Astartes. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 18, 2010 Share Posted August 18, 2010 *** loading plasma gun *** Â Dark Angels take Oaths seriously :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted August 18, 2010 Share Posted August 18, 2010 *** loading plasma gun ***Â Dark Angels take Oaths seriously :) As do Space Wolves, which both Calgar101 (I know, I know) and I are ;) *activates Frost Blade* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 18, 2010 Author Share Posted August 18, 2010 An Oath was made and fulfil it I shall. However after the waiting I think you may be a little disappointed as there’s not too much fighting...  Moved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Aha, very school boy :) I like it, it explores the 'deeper' B) relationships between Primarchs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 When describing the armour in the first paragraph, you have atypo with the color red - "read". Â Its fun enough to see Papa Smurf get angry :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 yes very entertaining, indeed.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 Thank you guys, hmm i looked at it and well thought it could do with a little fleshing out so Saturday i will flesh it out or i will add another chapter.. or both... who knows? I have pages of ideas and chapters just need to work on them and implement them in the correct places and get to those stages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Very nice, but I cant see Corax just standing by and letting it happen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 Perhpas he is, perhaps he wont. We'll see either this evening or tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atin Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Perhpas he is, perhaps he wont. We'll see either this evening or tomorrow. Â i can't wait.. great work on your last chapter.. i like the reaction of corax on the Weregeld matter.. Â keep it going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 22, 2010 Author Share Posted August 22, 2010 There will not be any adds for a little while im afraid. I will be going through the story, editing parts, correcting spelling and grammar mistakes and expanding the adds. For example the 'chapter' about the Ultramarines legion attacking a Tau base is too short -like many of my adds- to be considered a chapter. So basically when im done expect lots of adds :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blood Angel Scout Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Calgar101 Â Just found this thread yesterday and read through til now, quality! Hopefully get to read more soon. Â Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemistry Posted October 11, 2010 Share Posted October 11, 2010 Calgar 101 Â Loving your story, or should I say epic, so far. A great piece of art! Looking forward to additional updates if IGCSEs don't stop me first :wub: Â Have a nice day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulse Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 I liked the last installment a lot, although i did laugh out loud when the Ultramarines honour guard stood around Guilliman. They wouldn't have a chance, even 20 of them against Kurze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 when shall we be graced with more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemistry Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Ahh!!! The waiting is torture, grace us with the next installment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 Sorry to break it to you but i doubt i will be continuing this as i have zero motivation or ideas. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 ;) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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