Skirax Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 Woah, let's not be hasty... lets save the best for last :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 22, 2010 Author Share Posted July 22, 2010 It is indeed a bit clipped andsome sentences will be expanded upon but also you'll understand and get more information once the proper chapter is up... speaking of which i should get typing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 22, 2010 Author Share Posted July 22, 2010 Moved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 It's very good, but I always thought that Curze was quiet, reserved, and controlled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 22, 2010 Author Share Posted July 22, 2010 He maybe but the Night Haunter isn't :P Â edit- So if you pee off Curze, guess who you meet? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 Ah, you minx :D It's like the Batman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 23, 2010 Author Share Posted July 23, 2010 Haha, yes :mellow: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
space wolf of the 13th Posted July 25, 2010 Share Posted July 25, 2010 Hehehe Ultramarines now hmmm i wonder what you'll do to those poor unsuspecting Astartes i know i just had them beat by some wolves but you have me interrested yet again calgar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 25, 2010 Author Share Posted July 25, 2010 Since i quite like them nothing bad :) Actually have good plans for them ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
space wolf of the 13th Posted July 25, 2010 Share Posted July 25, 2010 A good plan ehh well we shall see then again you got some smushable tau lying about so........... you catch my drift Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 25, 2010 Author Share Posted July 25, 2010 Do not worry the Tau scum will be eradicated from the galaxy by the time this stories done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 25, 2010 Share Posted July 25, 2010 Maybe the Tau should give themselves over to the Chaos Gods? Lies told to them about the Greater Goose Good? Â The Mark of Communism Ascendant.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chapter master miles Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 Maybe the Tau should give themselves over to the Chaos Gods? Lies told to them about the Greater Goose Good? The Mark of Communism Ascendant....  if that happens i can see marines swapping their power armour for ripped shirts, tattoos and huge cigars and their bolters for M16s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 Maybe the Tau should give themselves over to the Chaos Gods? Lies told to them about the Greater Goose Good? The Mark of Communism Ascendant....  if that happens i can see marines swapping their power armour for ripped shirts, tattoos and huge cigars and their bolters for M16s Who's to say it can't happen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 29, 2010 Author Share Posted July 29, 2010 Me :P Do not worry the Taus demise will be filled with death, fire, explosions, death, death oh oh and death :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chapter master miles Posted July 31, 2010 Share Posted July 31, 2010 Me :P Do not worry the Taus demise will be filled with death, fire, explosions, death, death oh oh and death :rolleyes: Â make sure to leave some death for the other xenos scum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 3, 2010 Author Share Posted August 3, 2010 Here is a little line from the next chapter to (hopefully) grab your attentions.. Â Â His face like thunder Guilliman took a step towards his brother Primarch, "Do not mock me or my legion" he warned. Â Konrad stared menacingly at him " Or what? challenged Curze "Will you go running along to Daddy to tell on me?" he snorted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Lokiago Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 I've only managed to read up to page three, but I like your ideas so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Lokiago Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 I've only managed to read up to page three, but I like your ideas so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 To be honest, that Guilliman and Curze bit... sounds like a school free period threat. Â One would think beings with a superior intelect would be able of a bit more than "oh yeah?". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 4, 2010 Author Share Posted August 4, 2010 In the heat of the moment some times it is hard to think of a witty and intellectual reply :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 For a millenia old warrior also? Â BTW, just out of curiosity, how old are you? I'm 30. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 4, 2010 Author Share Posted August 4, 2010 Yes but i dont think they'd get into a slanging match of their vocabularies either... im 17 why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanhausen Posted August 5, 2010 Share Posted August 5, 2010 As said, out of curiosity. Â Maybe in context it makes more sense :D (the snippet I mean). Â Remember, its always constructive cryticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted August 9, 2010 Author Share Posted August 9, 2010 Hmmm i hope it fits in context! Haha :) Oh i know its constructive, dont worry my skins a bit thicker than that <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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