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the story is great! looking forward for more! love the artwork! I'm gonna assume that's you Firenze?

Aye, that be me. Ive been struggling with a way to make the Sagas better, and art seemed a good idea.

but the sagas are already great! we all enjoy reading them, and you shouldn't stop of think otherwise! I think your just being a perfectionist ;)

the story is great! looking forward for more! love the artwork! I'm gonna assume that's you Firenze?

Aye, that be me. Ive been struggling with a way to make the Sagas better, and art seemed a good idea.

but the sagas are already great! we all enjoy reading them, and you shouldn't stop of think otherwise! I think your just being a perfectionist B)

Nothing wrong with wanting to be a perfectionist :)

 

Gonna take ages to get the molten heretic smell out of my hair lol

hey firenze, great combat description but somehow this last chapter "lacks" a few things. like how did the traitors manage to isolate the space wolves? how were we able to cast the stormcaller without a runepriest amongst us? another thing is that even the pups seem superior in combat compared to a 1000 year old heretic(atleast that's what i think they are, original heretics, or are we talking more recently turned heretics?),surely the time in the warp passes differently and the heresy might just have ended 2 years ago in the warp so to speak but still. that's why i prefer non astartes opponants the least, astartes VS astartes is just so hard to write about!

just some constructive commentary mate! keep up the work! B)

hey firenze, great combat description but somehow this last chapter "lacks" a few things. like how did the traitors manage to isolate the space wolves? how were we able to cast the stormcaller without a runepriest amongst us? another thing is that even the pups seem superior in combat compared to a 1000 year old heretic(atleast that's what i think they are, original heretics, or are we talking more recently turned heretics?),surely the time in the warp passes differently and the heresy might just have ended 2 years ago in the warp so to speak but still. that's why i prefer non astartes opponants the least, astartes VS astartes is just so hard to write about!

just some constructive commentary mate! keep up the work! :P

Stormcaller was cast via Irlin [aka Grey Mage] from a little distance away as they closed in to save us.

The traitors are more recently turned, as they are my actual chaos warband I am working on.

 

And don't worry, most of the next opponents, via some special bits, are slightly easier to butcher :P

 

It was a little rushed, as I am still at college doing stuffs. So the next will be better.

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Since I don't have a model for you in my Lost Company, I'm just going to base this picture to best represent my Iron Priest (with my own personal touch of course). I just need to keep an eye out on certain bits, but I already have an idea in my head. I'm just gonna hold off for a bit until Canada Post decide to go back to work LOL since their still on strike.

Still waiting to see if I appear in any of these! But they're great reading! Keep them coming!!!

that was really subtle hahaha :P me thinks you need to partake in more events and brawls to earn a place in the sagas :sweat:

My "really subtle" angle on this was in regards to a statement Jonas made in one of his story lines saying he had "plans" for me.

 

But if you think I do not participate enough, very well. I will submit to be chastised for my lack of subtlety and cheek.

@Fen: I finalised the characters before I started writing. I wanted it to be more of a single tale rather than lots of cameos. Mentions of other packs may appear, but nothing major. Sorry :) If everyone could be here, I would put em in

 

@Mav: Strikes eh? Sounds like fun :D Im suprised to see none here actually...

And yes, you may use it for reference :D I based the pic on a couple of models of me I have already [one True Scaled ;)]

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Right many of you may have been wondering whats happened to this. And your right, Im slow. But I have been planning a small expansion to this... It was to be a secret till I posted the first, but oh well.

 

 

Im experimenting with making this a comic. Not to the same quality as the pic in this thread (itll take me forever), but still not too bad :P The first one (Chapter 3) is being sketched out as we speak. They will be a bit shorter than the stories atm, but its a small price. Any questions?

Right many of you may have been wondering whats happened to this. And your right, Im slow. But I have been planning a small expansion to this... It was to be a secret till I posted the first, but oh well.

 

 

Im experimenting with making this a comic. Not to the same quality as the pic in this thread (itll take me forever), but still not too bad :P The first one (Chapter 3) is being sketched out as we speak. They will be a bit shorter than the stories atm, but its a small price. Any questions?

 

 

Yeah...

 

Is it done yet?? Sorry just had to say it. Hope the comic is as good as the rest of your tales.

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