Captain_Volos Posted December 8, 2013 Share Posted December 8, 2013 - Hey guys, I'm writing this Deathwatch series, for fun and to improve my writing. If you want to tell me what you think or how I can improve, I would love to hear it, regards. The Sickness Within http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111117163633/warhammer40k/images/1/1b/Deathwatch.jpg Part I The Plight of Dawn was ancient, crafted in an unremembered time by unrecalled hands. The sole legacy of it's founder was itself the name, a name he had chosen, and a name he had deemed fit, for the strike cruiser was an like ebon spear in the night. Even as it sailed, its skin seemed one with the visage of the void, black, the twinkling lights of it's windows and crew stations a dull mimic to the distant stars beyond. The vessel was streamlined, no heavy cathedrals stood sentinel on it's bow and no mass of glittering statues adorned its hull. The sole peculiarity that stood out, though one would have to squint, was a simple white 'I' that was mirrored on both sides of the night vessel. The icon was not vast, rather small and simple. It was only there for it was custom in the Imperium to have designations to factions, armies, trade-cohorts, munitions, classes, and so on, upon the hulls of stellar vehicles. Few tarried away from this style. The meaning of the unassuming white 'I' was far from the modest and humble nature of it's appearance, for it was the symbol of the dreaded Inquisition. Holding power over the rich and the poor, the slave and the king, even life and death, the Inquisition were the harbingers of the God-Emperors will. Legends and tales abounded of the brutal means that this sinister 'tyrant' faction went upon keeping the Emperors domain alive. To some, the worlds and billions of souls that burned by their will, was enough to drive hatred, but also fear, and it is fear that the Inquisition needed from it's populace. Yet for all the cruelty, for all the suffering, the Inquisition was far more knowledgeable about the great threats to the Imperium and mankind, than any common or studied man. The knowledge of the mutant, the heretic, and the xenos, drove the sub-factions of the Inquisition to defend mankind by any means necessary. If that meant the deaths of a million to save a billion, so be it. Upon the Plight of Dawn, Inquisitors and warriors of the Ordo Xenos have fought and lived for untold centuries, some claim it in use at the founding of the Ordo itself. Had this been true, then the black burnt engines and exhaust vents of the Plight of Dawn itself were more likely cause of overuse, than paint. Likewise, perhaps once the ebon skin of the vessel itself had been a rich gold or a vibrant red. After hundreds of years of battle, travel, atmospheric entry and void debris, perhaps the hull was simply burned black. But that would make the founders tale false. Brother Sokol had sometimes pondered these things, as he gazed out of the thick glassed window of the Plight of Dawn's command bridge. He sometimes let his mind wander, though truthfully there was little in his mind to say or do at the moment. Turning from the visage of the void, he looked back onto the command deck, which was busier than normal. Human servants, completely dwarfed by his presence, scurried around, carrying mechanical devices, parchment papers, or simply running to-and-from buzzing, green-lit consoles. The humans avoided the ebon giant in their midst, whether this was out of duty to their work, or intimidation, Sokol was unsure. He stood at the massive windows or the Plight of Dawn, bellow him the humans toiled. Their work places where declined from the main floor of the bridge, so that officers could scan the void, if need be, without having the crew in the way. At the rear-center of the chamber was a vast mechanical throne, the wide exit doors almost looked like mechanical wings beside it. Upon the throne sat Vethor Hane, the captain of the Plight of Dawn, an older, scarred man, who had kept the vessel flying for well over three decades now. Hane had come from the Imperial Navy, his skill in void travel and space combat being noticed by the Inquisitor of the vessel, who offered him the position. The brotherhood liked Hane, he was a tough bastard, hard as old leather. They had fought xenos in void war, and while petty crewmembers occasionally went into full-on panic, Hane would slap them calm, and retain a cold smile, always pulling through to victory. Though he was impressed by the spectacle of the Astartes, he had never shown fear, and the way he spoke to them itself was born out of mutual respect and comradeship. Presently Hane did not look so pleased, his expression was ornery and clearly annoyed, as he briefly spoke with two massive shadows that stood aside his throne. Occasionally he barked out orders to faltering crewmembers, who always flinched when they heard their names. That made Sokol smile. One of the shadowy figures beside Hane broke away from the throne, walking towards Sokol. Some of the crew members glanced up at him, as he walked over the bridge that linked the throne to the window side of the Strike Cruiser. Sokol noted an uneasy look upon their faces, he was unsurprised. Gaius was always a hard one, his sarcasm renowned well among the brotherhood, as was his enmity for the cowardly and foolish. Astartes of the Ordo Xenos, collectively called the Deathwatch, all bore the same heraldry, representing their duties to the Inquisition. Their armour was jet black, save for the left arm and pauldron which were silver, emblazoned with the symbol of the Inquisition. The right pauldron too, was different, it bore the heraldry of each marines home chapter. Sokol saw the gleam of light from the stars behind him illuminate Gaius, his chapter pad a deep blue, with a golden lion head snarling as it's visage. The chapter icon of the Astral Claws. His own pad was black, black as coal grinded onto white paper. Over the black field was the swerving visage on a white dragon, fanged maw agape for the strike. The symbol of the Black Dragons chapter. Sokol glanced down at his forearms, rubbing them casually, his vision caught on strange slits that seemed built into the power armour. A twinge of shame, and worry caught his mind. His chapter was not hailed or famed in the same way the Astral Claws were. 'Brother, are you well?' asked Gaius as he approached Sokol. 'Yes,' Sokol smiled under his helm, 'Wandering thoughts, is all.' The Astral Claw remained silent and motionless for a moment, before turning briefly to face the command throne. 'Old Hane is upset with us,' grunted Gaius, clearly annoyed at the mans attitude. 'His annoyance is not our concern, duty drives us all, and the Imperium is what matters. Not Hane's worries,' stated Sokol, crossing his arms. Sokol turned his head, to peer out at the side of the ship. He glanced at rends and tears on the flank of the hull. Sparks flew from gouges and wounds that were torn into the steel of the vessel, and cables from unknown compartments hung out, like entrails of the ship. 'Though his point is valid,' added Sokol. 'The Necrons who caused those wounds are on a far worse footing,' sneered Gaius. 'Agreed, but I understand where the man is coming from. This has been his vessel to command for over thirty years, and we are risking it to this sudden errand.' 'Would you rather ignore the call, brother?' questioned Gaius, tilting his head mockingly. Gaius' insults were often little more than spikes, but they were common, and they bore into the victims pride, as Sokol had known. He spun his head to the Astral Claw, the emerald green of his visors seeming to have brightened in their intensity. 'I will do my duty,' he hissed, 'I will suffer no disgusting alien in the Emperors realm! However, If we lose our vessel, and lives, in an ambush, I would place the blame on us for going with such haste.' 'Vyetar Secondus is thirty days away, real-time, brother. It is luck, or perhaps fate, that brings us there.' Sokol scoffed, 'Fate? Such beliefs are foolish Gaius.' 'Ironic, coming from a Black Dragon,' laughed the Astral Claw. 'What do you mean,' he asked, puzzled. 'How many times, have those "gifts" of yours saved your hide? And still you despise them?' Sokol remained quiet. Before he could reply, a warning siren buzzed once across the vessel, timed together with a red flare of light. 'Attention, all stations,' Hane's voice was a mechanical growl through the comm. array, 'Brace for entry into the void, we make for Vyetar Secondus with all haste. According to our Astropaths, we should be there in roughly four days, so make ready!' The two Astartes ended their chat, looking over to the command throne, where the last of the Astarte trio was leaving the bridge. The black warrior bore the heraldry of the Black Templars, and was marked Sergeant of their Deathwatch squad. 'Brothers,' the vox chimed within their helmets, 'Group on the training deck, Afonso out.' The two spared a glance at one another once more, before making their way out of the command bridge, following the Black Templar. * * * * * Upon the combat-training level, the lights were off or dimmed low. Visibility was poor, and the extreme combat training and simulation machines were cloaked in darkness. Humans would have a hard time navigating the deck at the current state, but thanks to their enhanced vision the Astartes easily pierced the gloom. Although half a company could train here at a time, only two warriors were now testing their mettle, and it was upon one another. Within the confines of a simple combat circle, they stared at each other, taking in every move and nuance of their opponents strides and posture. A single beam of light shone weakly over the circle, enough to show the heraldry of the Lamenters and Guardians of the Covenant upon the duellists. Both held dull Gladius swords, their real weapons being taken care of by serfs in the armoury. However, in Astarte hands even these weapons could kill men with relative ease. The slow circling motion turned into a whirlwind as the Guardian leapt at the Lamenter, a wry smile on his face. The sword came down in a killing arc but was deflected, before the Lamenter quickly brought forth a harsh elbow to the gut, sending his attacker sprawling back. The Guardian maintained his footing, and regained composure, even as the Lamenter made his counter charge. Right before impact, the Guardian side stepped out of the way, and thrust his blade into the Lamenters back. 'Another one for me,' he smiled. The Lamenter sighed, and nodded solemnly. 'I shame my Primarch,' he muttered, his sentiment half honest. The Guardian of the Covenant patted his brothers shoulder, 'Come now, we're simply working on those combat skills. We all know you can outshoot the entire squad!' 'Your words are kind brother, but I must become skilled in both methods of war,' he walked away letting his brothers hand fall from his shoulder. 'If I am to return home,' he whined. The Guardian shook his head, 'Lamenters...' he thought. Clapping resonated across the room, an echo filling the Guardians ears, he turned, and had almost forgotten that two of his brothers had been watching the fight for some time. Sokol and Gaius walked into the brief light of the arena, laughing slightly. 'Well, brother Raziel, you show your virtue again. This is, what, the tenth time you have bested brother Basilio?' questioned Gaius, stopping a metre away from Raziel, with Sokol behind. 'I am trying to open his eyes to melee combat tactics Gaius. I am aiding Basilio in bettering himself,' the surety of his voice and purpose seemed to annoy Gaius, who quickly nodded his head. 'Well then, how about a different demonstration?' questioned the Astral Claw. Raziel lowered his helm, 'What do you mean?' he replied. Gaius motioned for Basilio to come to them, reluctantly the youngest of the marines joined his brothers, upset by his loss he had dropped his gladius onto the floor. 'How would you like to see two experts fight?' pondered Gaius, looking over at Basilio. The Lamenter, looked back between the Astral Claw and Guardian of the Covenant. 'I would enjoy such a spectacle,' he answered, a hint of adrenaline to his voice. 'How about it brother?' questioned Gaius, giving Raziel a questioning gaze. Raziel, feeling somewhat surrounded and beset by, nodded simply, 'Very well. Claim a blade then Gaius,' he responded. Gaius broke into a short burst of laughter, that caught everyone off guard, 'Oh you thought I meant myself? No brother, I'm more of a sharpshooter, as you know.' Without turning, he knocked onto Sokol's chest-plate, the dull clang of the armour seeming to resound louder in the echoing training level. Sokol was caught off guard, he had been zoned out of the conversation for more than half of it, and wasn't entirely sure what was going on. Raziel smiled, revealing sharp white teeth, that almost gleamed in the low light. 'Brother Sokol, shall we demonstrate?' he asked. Sokol, looked back at Gaius, and then at Basilio, their faces hid behind Mark VI helmets. With a sigh, he nodded, walking to where Basilio had dropped his blunt Gladius. As he grasped the weapon, a familiar surge fell upon him, the thrill of battle echoed in his mind, as it always did when he once again held a weapon. He rose, slowly, and as he turned to face Raziel, Gaius and Basilio left the circle, returning to shadows to spectate. The two warriors inspected one another, Raziel was slender and fast, he was also damn good with a sword, they all knew this. Sokol, however, was big, even for a marine, and he was strong, in battle he would allow himself to go berserk, punishing any enemy. They both entered combat stances, and in a burst of lightning speed, Raziel flew towards Sokol. His blade glittered in the low light, coming around in an uppercut that Sokol barely managed to deflect. The Guardian did not stop his assault, rather drove it forwards, every strike became faster and more frenzied, and the Black Dragon found himself hard pressed on the defence. Sokol managed to parry the blade away to the side, and using his strength he tackled into the guardian, sending him reeling. The battle seemed a mimic of the earlier one, and just as then Sokol went to charge his disoriented brother, knowing that knocking him flat would spell his end. Raziel barely avoid the bull-like charge, and with a lower cut managed to send his larger brother tumbling to the floor, however, Sokol rolled to the side fast enough, avoiding the blow that ended Basilio. The Black Dragon fought on one knee, desperately parrying lightning strikes with each motion, until finally Raziel sent the blade flying from his hand. Raising his sword overhead for a killing blow, Raziel knew he had won. At least, he would have won were it any other marine in the galaxy. Just as the sword descended, Sokol brought forth his left arm, and with a twist of his wrist, a long bone-blade shot out from his forearm, from the strange slot forged therein. The bone blade, parried the blunt gladius, and knocked it aside, while at the same time, Sokol's left arm flew up, another blade emerging from his forearm, and the sword-sharp end flew right onto Raziel's throat. The Guardian of the Covenant was shocked, he stood motionless, feeling the ice cold steel-like bone edge against his neck. 'You lose, brother,' remarked Sokol bitterly. As he rose. the bone-blades returned into his arms, with a grunt of pain barely audible from Sokol. Without word, the rest of the party emerged from the gloom, Gaius patting both fighters on the shoulder. 'Brother Raziel, perhaps you should heed your own words,' said Gaius aloud. 'What do you mean?' questioned Raziel, clearly upset by the turn of events. 'Perhaps you should "Try to open your own eyes, to different melee tactics,"'stated Gaius. Insulted, Raziel threw him a glare, Gaius bowed his head slowly, 'I meant no offense brother, but this is a proper lesson for us all. Expect the unexpected.' There was a brief silence for a moment, until Basilio broke in, 'I see now, so to survive in melee, I need to grow blades within my arms? Where is the nearest Chirurgeon?' The others gave a long chuckle, though Sokol was somewhat uncomfortable, the sinister grows within his arms were a dark shadow over his chapter. The Black Dragons were always hounded by the Inquisition on this, and he was tested before being allowed to join the Ordo Xenos himself. Finding him pure of body, the Ordo Xenos accepted him into their ranks, though always kept a vigil, and he knew it. 'Impressive display, if I admit so myself,' came a voice from behind the four warriors. They all turned together, and through the darkness, two figures slowly emerged. Just how long the Sergeant and Librarian had been watching was lost to the others. Coming close to the light the Librarians shoulder pad shone red, a black winged teardrop was his icon, the icon of the Blood Angels. The tall force axe he held, and the psychic hood revealed him as a Librarian to any who would not have known prior. 'Brothers, he intoned, our duty must be discussed.' The others rarely saw Sveti anymore, the Blood Angel was embittered about the loss of their most recent comrade, Vlord the Space Wolf. He blamed himself for the Wolfs demise, for Vlord was overcome by many Necron flayed ones during the battle, and in haste Sveti had unleashed a torrent of psychic energy. Vlord had died all the same, and to some degree Sveti had blamed it on himself, and his reckless attack, though the others believed it was more the cause of Necron blades. They nodded asking what the duty was, where they were going, and who they were fighting. Sveti raised up a quelling hand, allowing Afonso to move in front of the group. With arms held behind his back, Afonso looked like a military leader of the Imperial Guard, he slowly paced in front of the rallied Astartes. 'Yesterday, as Sokol and Gaius know, for they were with me, we received a transmition, almost as soon as it was sent. It came from a research colony on the winter-locked world of Vyetar Secondus. The colony is built around an old archaeological dig-site that they believe possess some relics from the legendary era of the great crusade. Some believe it is a warmachine, some that it is the Emperors claw, some even that is a relic of the Salamanders.' 'Are we going in there to retrieve this relic for the Inquisition then?' interrupted Basilio, his tone dull and mocking, clearly hoping this wasn't some petty errand. Afonso shook his head, 'No, the relic has not even been uncovered yet, and such things do not fall to Astartes,' he growled. 'Well, if we are going to battle, I pray the enemy do not possess space craft, for the Plight of Dawn has been sorely injured in the battle against the xenos Necrons,' intoned Sokol, expressing the concerns of Hane. Afonso's brow furrowed, becoming instantly annoyed, 'I know the worries of Vethor Hand, but the Inquisition requires our duties done! And I would not leave a world to suffer at xenos hands,' he snapped. Sokol shook his head, 'This is the most foolish gamble in history,' he remarked bitterly. 'And a gamble it will be, this world is not far from us. Fate, or the will of the Emperors, brings the angels of death so close, are we to limp away to lick our wounds so readily?' intoned the Black Templar. The others shook their heads, knowing the value of both opinions. 'Well do we know what we are fighting at least?' Raziel asked. 'Negative, Research Chief-Castor sent the call for help. From what we know, civilians, scientists, and dig crew have been going missing over the past two weeks. The snows and blizzards have intensified and dozens of people are claiming seeing strange black figures in the white wild,' explained Afonso. 'Strange figures? In what way?' inquired Sveti, holding his chin in his hand. 'Tall, lithe, one man claims to have had an encounter. From his description, it almost sounds,' 'Eldar!' spat Raziel. The Templar nodded in agreement, 'I believe the same.' The others looked at one another, knowing what lay ahead if Eldar were the foe, for they were a deadly race. 'If it is indeed Eldar, then we may not be enough to stop them,' stated Basilio, 'Their kind always travel in military cohorts.' 'I believe if there were a sizable Eldar army they would have already destroyed the colony by now,' explained Sveti. 'Perhaps they already have, who knows. We do not even know if it is Eldar just yet,' added Gaius. There was a moments pause, as they contemplated the situation, and realized they would probably have to hunt down the Eldar, and in a blizzard. Never more was Vlord so missed. 'Dark Eldar,' chimed in Sokol. They looked at him, though he returned none of their gazes. 'Dark Eldar take prisoners, slaves. They drag women, men, children, all back to their shadowed torture chambers, where they make their prey suffer unfathomable agony.' 'Dark Eldar do make far more sense, they are adept at quick attacks, even more so than regular Eldar. This could also explain why the colony is intact. Perhaps they are enjoying spreading fear amongst the populace,' explained Gaius. 'I've seen the bastards do vile things like this across the Maelstrom zone. They strike at undefended prey, make them suffer in any way imaginable, then drag them screaming into a nightmarish hell, that they will beg to die from,' he added. The others were disturbed by this news, the thoughts of the colony already being an empty ghost town became a very real danger. But they would do what they could, it was the duty of the Deathwatch after all. 'If it is Dark Eldar, I want you all to spend the next three days training hard. Our last great battle was against the vile Necrons of Heliopolis X. They claimed one of our brothers lives, and many lives from our allies. The Eldar however, are different from the Necrons. They are fast as quick-silver, bearing weapons equally as deadly as the life-takers of the Necrons, and their vehicles move with a supernatural quickness and manoeuvrability. You will all have to be like a knives edge. Now prepare my brothers, and remember: The Emperor Protects!' With Afonso's speech complete, the others quickly went about their duties. A vox call to the bridge by Afonso had the lights illuminate the training floor as electricity ignited the machines into renewed life. Bolter targets came into motion, combat servitors entered the training circles, and serfs marched in bearing the holy weapons of the Deathwatch. The Deathwatch would fall upon Vyetar Secondus, they would be prepared, and they would deliver the people to salvation. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/284271-the-sickness-within-deathwatch-story/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathspectersgt7 Posted December 8, 2013 Share Posted December 8, 2013 I like it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/284271-the-sickness-within-deathwatch-story/#findComment-3540580 Share on other sites More sharing options...
spjaco Posted December 9, 2013 Share Posted December 9, 2013 Great read, keep it up. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/284271-the-sickness-within-deathwatch-story/#findComment-3542008 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfkry Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 indeed good read. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/284271-the-sickness-within-deathwatch-story/#findComment-3542825 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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