Demus Ragnok Posted August 28, 2017 Share Posted August 28, 2017 How about Keepers of the Flame ? Also Wardens of Light. Also also I'd like to here what other frater think of our little heresy project. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 I've changed the name. Does it look good as you thought it would? That's two for the Wardens of Light. I am, too. I wonder if we get mentioned at all outside this sub-forum. Demus Ragnok 1 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 So, with three days left, who discovered Niklaas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 So, with three days left, who discovered Niklaas? As in Imperial first contact, Daerr'd and the Emperor. Nik suspects that the E guided him to the meteorite he forged his hammer from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 During this early period, Alex would make arrangements to meet each of his brothers. What would be the best way to introduce himself to Nik? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Best way would be to ask for his help with a problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 How about Alex asks for Nik and his Fire Keepers' aid for a joint compliance campaign? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 How about Alex asks for Nik and his Fire Keepers' aid for a joint compliance campaign? Perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Excellent, just need to work on the timing. After his initial tutelage with the Emperor, does Nik begin the Great Crusade on his own or with another Primarch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 He strikes out on his on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 What title does his son refer to him? Is he more casual in private? ~~~ [Here's a first draft of the invite.] An Open Invitation to Hobby Writers To anyone who wants to practice writing, to work on something new, or to potentially add to a canon, the Brotherhood of the Lost invites all writers to the Monthly Fluff Challenge! Every month, we vote and select a Legion from this alternate Heresy project to develop and write about. If you've ever heard about the Brotherhood of the Lost but was intimidated by its huge size, this is an easy way to introduce oneself to this growing universe. We have several writers who are willing to guide, advise, and ease you into the lore. As to what the requirements for your contribution, it is only that it connects to the Legion of the Month. Want to write a short story involving the Legion's Primarch? Absolutely. Want to practice writing in the style of a FW rulebook? Go right ahead. Want to create your own character within the Legion? You're more than welcome to. Just look for the thread titled, "BotL - Monthly Fluff Challenge" to get started. [How does it look?] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 That is a nice advertisement. And I am also keen to know what the other fraters think. Personally I think they try to ignore us^^ except for a few. And I am for the Eagle Warriors. They are the arch traitors but with ao108 most of the time absent I habe the personal feeling that we need to work them out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 The ad looks fine to my eyes I agree with Mikhail. The EW have very little depth for the arch-heretics due to AOs absence, so I think we should focus on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 True. Where do their origins stand now? And what's up for grabs? I don't know if their Terran roots were ever determined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Their Terran recruits came from Central America Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 We should perhaps try and avoid them being Aztec from the start. The Blood Wolves' culture being so close to Mycenae's is an allowable coincidence, but having it happen again might be a bit too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 I don't see why their shouldn't be tw o legions both of whose terran cultures resemble their later homeworld culture. After all, it happens in canon, with the Night Lords and Iron Warriors to name two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 That's methods, not aesthetic culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Wardens of Light - Blunt, Demus Eagle Warriors - Mikhal, Sig I'll post the invite when I get home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Can we get a deciding vote, Sim? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Eh? We're still two days out, and I allow members to vote for multiple Legions. Just cast an official vote, Blunt, if you wish to break the current tie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Oh right. Ooh, I'm torn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 30, 2017 Share Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) "My lord." Niklaas turned his attention away from the city. Gone was the ash his Legion had created when they had attacked, replaced by the roar of construction as the newly-named Fire Keepers raised battlements. The people of Vuul may have rejected the Emperor's hand upon first contact, but Niklaas would not continue punishing them after they had sworn their oaths to the Imperium. The wind bellowed from the hive's peak, but it was nothing more than a gentle breeze to a Primarch. His son did not even need to shout due to Niklaas' enhanced hearing. "A ship has arrived in-system. It is the Árma, Alexandros' chariot." Niklaas quirked a black eyebrow. "I thought Alexandros placed his flag aboard the Elpis?" [invite sent.] Edited September 5, 2017 by simison Demus Ragnok 1 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted August 30, 2017 Share Posted August 30, 2017 Going to bed. I ask that someone keep an eye on the invite thread in the Announcements sub-forum in case anyone shows interest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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