bluntblade Posted April 11, 2017 Share Posted April 11, 2017 The "his mount as well" semi colon should just be a comma Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4708716 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBlindPrimarch Posted April 13, 2017 Share Posted April 13, 2017 Thanks for the comments, changes have been made Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4710581 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted April 13, 2017 Share Posted April 13, 2017 "Brother, a private moment if you will."  Even within the safe confines of the Elpis' strategium and a hundred hours away from combat, Azus carried his sniper rifle. Throughout the briefing, the Lord of the Dune Serpents stood farther away from the center than everyone else. After handing out the last of the assignments, the Warmaster beckoned his younger brother.  It was rare enough for Alexandros to be on campaign compared to the old days. It was rarer still when he could coordinate and deploy besides his brother Primarchs. Since his appointment a decade ago, he had been steadily finding campaigns were he could renew old ties as he had done with Daer'dd three years ago. The same didn't hold true for Azus. This would be Alexandros' fourtheenth attempt in forging some connection with his aloof brother.  Without any acknowledgement, Azus waited as the Serpents, Wardens, and other officers filed out. When the last individual was away, Azus simply said, "Do you have intelligence for me, Warmaster?" Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4710876 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted April 30, 2017 Share Posted April 30, 2017 Thanks to Talonair for the reminder. It's that time again, so which Legion are we doing this month? My vote's for the Predators Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726001 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 (edited) Checking the votes from last month, after the Dune Serpents, the Drowned had the most votes.  Other Legions voted on were Warbringers, Godslayers, and Void Eagles.  Starting the vote for May.  May Fluff Challenge  Predators - Blunt  Void Eagles - Blind/Mikhal  Drowned - Drak/Talonair/Kel  Godslayers - Sig/Mikhal/Skal Edited May 1, 2017 by simison Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726257 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBlindPrimarch Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 My vote is the void eagles...got a pretty good idea already Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726271 Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Drakzilla~ Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 I'd say we go for the Drowned, as sort of a welcome back gesture for Hesh. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726302 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted May 1, 2017 Author Share Posted May 1, 2017 "What is dead may never die, but rises again, harder and stronger." Â Â For those unfamiliar with GoT: Drowned for May Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726353 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 Godslayers Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726422 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talonair Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 Drowned Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726531 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 I suggest to wait for the drowned until the basework is done. Â So Godlayers or Void Eagles. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726598 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 My vote is on the Godslayers. The Drowned are in the middle of a rebuilding, let them have it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726627 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 We have a two-way tie. Haven't heard from Grifft and Redd among others. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726880 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted May 1, 2017 Author Share Posted May 1, 2017 Oh the Godslayers did vote for themselves...jerks. :P Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726937 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 Oh the Godslayers did vote for themselves...jerks. Â You saw nothing! Kelborn 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726940 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 So my calling is to commit deicied, eh? So it is, shall it be. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4726962 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 If I don't hear from anyone else in 4 hours, I'll flip a coin. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727003 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 We should probably let Hesh decide what he thinks of the fluff we've added so far, and not bury him under more :p Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 I'm inclined to agree, but I'm not sure how things will go with another Squig legion. I had trouble with the challenge because there's no feedback which is why I didn't finish my piece.  So, both options aren't optimal in my opinion. Kelborn 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 Okay, if feedback is the prob then why not doing the press this month?? Kel is very active. Skalpy AS well. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727258 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 Predators? Alternatively WoL, Grave Stalkers (if someone can come up with an officer to lead the boarding of the Dragon, better still) or WoP. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727280 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 Okay, if feedback is the prob then why not doing the press this month?? Kel is very active. Skalpy AS well.  Because I'm not sure if anyone else is struggling like I am. So, I didn't put a limit on which Legion would be considered.  Unless people want to change their minds, the coin came up heads, which means the Drowned for this month. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727385 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talonair Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 If people have objections to the Drowned being chosen this month, then perhaps we should do a different Legion Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 So far, it's just myself, and I already have an idea thanks to reading Helsreach. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 I've got some Predator plans, though I don't know how far that feel like challenge stuff. I tackled the Drowned for one month, but overall life will be easier if we're targeting the one Legion as a group (and that's what the spirit of the challenge is meant to be) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/331712-botl-monthly-fluff-challenge/page/5/#findComment-4727454 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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