Deathwatch Adventure - The Voiceless Lament

[Hoplite]

This is a Deathwatch adventure meant for two players - what I call a Buddy Marine adventure. One of the players should belong in the Deathwatch while the other is a Chapter Marine. It is meant for novice players and it can serve as a campaign’s introductory adventure for two of the players.

 

The Buddy Marines have to make their way through the forlorn wastes of Saguros and track down the lost Omnia Squad. Their long march will be challenged by the techno-barbarians of the Kaa civilization; on top of that, they’ll have to overcome mutant beasts and the environment itself. Their only clue that some of the Brothers of the Omnia Squad are still alive is the voiceless lament and it gives them the will to go on when the going gets tough. Through it all, the Buddy Marines know that the worst challenge lies at the very end of the road, when and if they find the Omnia Squad and face the foe that conquered them. 

 

Get it here: https://vasilispetrovic.podia.com/orpgadv

[Mazer Rackham]

I had a quick look at it.

 

Very professionally laid out and well put together. Since it is also board appropriate, and it contains your contact information for amazon etc, you could also host it here on the Bolter & Chainsword in the Downloads section.

 

What I might look at doing, if I were you, would be to excise any GW or Licensed artwork completely, as another Fan Work, the Liber Badab, a Horus Heresy 2.0 total conversion to use the characters and setting of the Badab War was also filled with disclaimers and such got a takedown notice from GW because they used arts, fonts, all that kind of stuff.

 

I think this adventure looks great, and I'll be going over it in more detail when I have a chance.

 

In other news, I'll be linking to this in the RPG Nook, the B&C's roleplaying sub-forum so that they can get eyes on it.

 

It might be helpful to throw a post in here too if you already haven't, and introduce yourself to the board at large.

 

Good work!

[Lysimachus]

Agreed with all of what Mazer said! One additional thread to check out: Play by Post Register

 

If you're into this kind of stuff, we are always on the lookout for more players/GMs!