Thank you. When I get back from work tonight I'll look at your work and try to provide the same.
As for your points:
1) I'll try to make it more clear later tonight what I meant by their geneseed. Basically, they ARE an Ultramarine successor. But, they don't know that. They have never genetically proven who they come from, and so they look towards the two founding legions they most closely match in culture and tactics as their possible progenitors, the Raven Guard or Space Wolves. They are definitely not a successor of the Space Wolves.
2) I am very attached to the color scheme, though I admit it isn't quite what it looks in DoW I and II and suffers for it. I'm open to suggestions, but I am attached.
Thanks for the look over.
1) Now I get what you mean. Though for the sake of your background it would be better to elude to this fact and not just blatantly say it. It adds a bit of mystery..... :down:
2) As for your color scheme I completely understand your reasoning. Seeing as though your chapter name includes tiger I might go for a quartered or halved paint scheme.
Rylanor