I will give you a review and criticism later this week. 

You know I love the story and we have a great report going, so.

• The story jumps from one time era to another, which cab lead to some confusion.
• The font could be changed from when you are are describing the events/ Explanation, compared to the story. 
• A listing of Characters for each of the story arch's would be nice. I find myself sometimes flipping around to find the tie to them

2 hours ago, W.A.Rorie said:

You know I love the story and we have a great report going, so.

• The story jumps from one time era to another, which cab lead to some confusion.
• The font could be changed from when you are are describing the events/ Explanation, compared to the story. 
• A listing of Characters for each of the story arch's would be nice. I find myself sometimes flipping around to find the tie to them

Great points and thank you for taking the time to honour my request, @W.A.Rorie.

1. A very fair point. I do not always post things from either the same story nor the same timeframe. I will endeavour to be most consistent in the future.

2. Again, a very fair point. I will do this going forward.

3. I will work on that this weekend. I realise I have quite a few characters. Interestingly enough, I counted up the numbers of male and female characters, as a matter of curiosity, and it turns out I have an approximately 50/50 ratio. This is not by design; I just create a character for a role that seems to fit what I am trying to say.

Thank you, again.