Skirax Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 300th post. Actually, his armour is much more like a Legionnaires than a gladiators because of the abdominal shaped breast plate, and the tunic he wears at his waist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 Thank you Messiah :P I don't really like them a lot either Nova, hence their anihilation on one planet by the Ultramarines and this attack by the Nigh Lords and Raven Guard. Wont write another chapter for a while yet as im bust taking pics to sell my fairly large but craply(that a word?) painted SM army. Ah thats okay, i have not ready anything about Angron so i know next to nothing about his armour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 Actually, the correct term is, 'crapply painted' :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 I bow to your superior knowledge :P Anyways my camera is charging so i guess i can atleast outlay the next chapter. Continue with the 'Tau-bush' or shall i continue the WebWay assault(plot twists and more fluff heresy) or battle of the Warmasters? oh the possibilities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razblood Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 This is a really fascinating story and I have enjoyed every chapter, especially the Angron/Russ and Night Lords/Raven Guard stuff ;) . I only have one minor issue and that is the length of your chapters. I feel that they are a bit short at times but then again you have been very prolific with them so i'll just go back to my corner and shut up ;). Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 Thanks Raz. No, do not shut up!;) I need people to comment ;) Yes at first my chaoters were quite small but now i am trying to lengthen them, its swigs and roundabouts really :P Thank you and i shall try to keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 If I had to say one thing, it's that you always end your chapters with a cliff hanger or a little speech; if I were you, I'd break this trend; you'll get stuck in a rut of thinking that it's appropriate for every chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 Hmm yes thats a little habit of mine, a trade mark if you like :D Maybe i should cut that out for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 KILL THE XENO!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 Purge the unclean! Any ways a chapter will be added tomorrow, although what it will contain i do not know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dosjetka Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Hm...I've read the last chapter and it's great, though an Ethereal would not talk like that to his soldiers ("Haven't you been trained..." etc...) and the word Devilfih comes back too many times (5 times in 1 paragraph!). Anyway, apart from that, it's well written and I can't wait for more! B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 24, 2010 Author Share Posted March 24, 2010 Hmm it is hard to know what they would do in situations like that and i was trying to think of alternatives to Devilfish but in the end it just stuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dosjetka Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Ok, no probs. It's only me anyway. You have to sastisfy your readers in general, not every single one of them! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 24, 2010 Author Share Posted March 24, 2010 Ha, i can try but i do try to avoid repeating myself a lot so the story doen't become bland. Anyways i need an idea for the next chapter! Continue with the Tau slaughter? Battle of the Warmasters? Or something else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dosjetka Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Hm..have you finished with Perturabo? You may want to change a bit from Tau...IMO...but then it's your choice! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 24, 2010 Author Share Posted March 24, 2010 Perturabo is finished but Perturabo and Dorn was started. Hmm i have a few ends to tie up. I think i'll finish some stuff and then continue into the Webway as some important things will happen there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dosjetka Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Good idea! :D Can't wait for the next update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legionator Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Excellent work! But I have to warn you: If another Heresy happens, you will feel the wrath of the Emperor. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 I think that another Heresy would be an interesting twist, but in a different way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 24, 2010 Author Share Posted March 24, 2010 Sorry to disappoint but i do not in anyways plan for another heresy. The fact that the first one happens is sufficient to make me rant for HOURS on end. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walter Payton Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Hang on. You have ressurrected 18 primarchs. What about...the (whispers) other two (normal voice, just as fifty GK terminators teleport around me) Ah, crap, I didn't expect the Imperial Inquisition Brother-Captain Dorylaeum of the Grey Knights: NOBODY EXPECTS THE IMPERIAL INQUISITION (executes me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted March 24, 2010 Author Share Posted March 24, 2010 Hmm the other two, that does pose an interesting question. I must leave ye and think and maybe write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 Well, this thread now has more posts than mine. Congratulations Calgar101 *hands over baton with tears in eyes* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Chaplain Gaius Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 Sorry to disappoint but i do not in anyways plan for another heresy. The fact that the first one happens is sufficient to make me rant for HOURS on end. :P boo! we want an encore :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacefrisian Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 Hmm the other two, that does pose an interesting question. I must leave ye and think and maybe write. So now you do consider writing stuff for those 2, why not earlier when i asked? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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