Nacho Wolf Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Hey evryone, Im pretty new here, but I reckon you should all lay off him a bit, sure, it doesnt make much sense, but its fan fiction anyway, plus it sounded cool. Now I see wat your all talking about, but come on, give him some space. Rant Over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 Cheers Nacho :P Thank you. Well, if I'm honest, this was always going to be an experimental chapter, so if it didn't work, then at least I know where my strengths are (and where my weaknesses lie) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 No problem, and I'm sorry if I upset anyone, but your story is great, and I hate it when people get angry over one chapter, now, back to business. We want more! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted June 27, 2010 Share Posted June 27, 2010 Skirax i wasn't angry or trying to upset you but you can write better than '300' in Space and you know it ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted June 27, 2010 Author Share Posted June 27, 2010 ;) :) I wasn't saying that anyone offended me! Nacho here decided to defend me of his own accord! I thank you Nacho, and you will rewarded. Have a cookie *throws said cookie* Now, hopefully the Update should come mid-week, but you know me :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted June 28, 2010 Share Posted June 28, 2010 yay, cookies!! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted June 28, 2010 Author Share Posted June 28, 2010 Enjoy :angry: <_< So, the preview of the next chapter that I put up previously has been scrapped, and the new draft will come later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted July 1, 2010 Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well? where is it, no update means no return cookie ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 1, 2010 Author Share Posted July 1, 2010 Sorry, busy life = (dare I say it?) Little to no time for Warhammer :mellow: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wysten Posted July 2, 2010 Share Posted July 2, 2010 The story is noval, but I thought the last chapter with all the 300 references was a major turnoff. It really felt like it was trying to cram in as many 300 references to the counter balience of casting away Warhammer 40,000's style. I don't mind the odd one being flung in, but that was too much. Plus, for some reason, I always get He-man in my head when reading about the Emplore fighting the gods. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 3, 2010 Author Share Posted July 3, 2010 Cheers for the comment, as said I'm leaving the whole 300 reference behind. Really sorry, been so busy, can't get much done these days :D Went to Alton Towers with School yesterday though, so can you blame me? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 NOOOOO! Not real life! why does it torture us so! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 8, 2010 Author Share Posted July 8, 2010 Alas, not all came rolling from the womb with a stein in hand and roaring praises to Russ - A great wolf player one time, I forget his name. Long Live the All Father! Hopefully, there will be an update later this week :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 dear skirax we need the update nowwwwwwwwww Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 8, 2010 Author Share Posted July 8, 2010 Aww thanks lad ;) Ok, will work on it now! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 I agree with them, we need an update or better yet several! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 8, 2010 Author Share Posted July 8, 2010 Teaser: The banners fluttered in the cold breath of the frozen morning, each ablaze with the taint of Chaos; foul markings of each and every false God spreading across the ripped and torn icons that had somehow carved paths of bloodshed and death across the galaxy. The Sternguard stood atop the wall of bodies, the stench of the decaying corpses beneath their feet filtered out by their helmets. ‘Why do they just... stand there?’ asked Valcornius, and Herculius shook his head. ‘I have no answer, Brother,’ replied the Sergeant, and a gruff voice came from behind him. ‘They stand there because they fear the roar of our guns, the cries of our brothers and the scream of our chain blades,’ said Bulveye, and the assembled brothers turned to look at the new comer. He regarded them with brotherly rivalry, and a hint of unrestrained fury glinted within his eye. A tint of yellow hid in the corners of his eyes, and Herculius recoiled from what he saw in a fleeting moment. Bulveye whistled, and a host of feral looking beasts loped up the slope to the crest of the wall. Their tongues rolled from their lips and their hands slouched at their sides, and long, mangy fur fell in a cascade from their forearms and onto their bestial claws. ‘What are these beasts?’ breathed Valcornius, and as one the beasts snarled at him, their eyes alight with hatred. Bulveye rounded on the Fist, and that same look in his eye flared forward once more. ‘Hold your tongue, whelp. Question not what they are, but WHO they are. They are Wulfen, and they will save your lives,’ snarled the grizzled warrior, and he turned back to the rotting crenulations, before breaking down in laughter. ‘What is it?’ snapped Herculius, all sense of good will towards this man lost in an instant. ‘Reminds me of a time on a planet of the dread God Nurgle. Happy days...’ he sighed, then turned to the assembled masses. ‘Come get us, you base-born curs!’ roared Bulveye, and the Wulfen howled into the night air, their breath coming out as icy contrails in the freezing cold. The earth rumbled and the horde of traitors before them roared in bloodlust, charging in a screaming frenzy. Bulveye calmly turned to what appeared to be the leader of the Wulfen Pack. ‘Bring up the Long Fangs. We’re going to need some heavy fire.’ I realise that you're probably thinking 'GET ON WITH IT!' but life has stopped me getting on with it, plus I'm writing the Saga for my Wolf Priest at the moment, so forgive me :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 There is no forgiveness! You cannot fail in your duty to please us with your story or you shall suffer our collective wrath! Ooh Saga? Whats his name...? And yeaa some fighting, Space Wolves style; i like :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 8, 2010 Author Share Posted July 8, 2010 His name is Jurgis the Wise, and the Saga details his rise to High Wolf Priest of his Great Company. I'm considering having him tutor someone famous, such as Egil Ironwolf, but then again which Wolf Lord is best fitting for his character etc. Or then again, maybe I'll have him ATTEMPT to tutor Lukas. Thanks for the comment Calgar, keep 'em coming :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 Oooh, Lukas? Bahaha that Blood Claw can never be tutored, not even by Ulrik :D Good name, perhaps you should write a new story for your Great Company? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 8, 2010 Author Share Posted July 8, 2010 Well I was going to but I don't want to detract away from this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calgar101 Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 True true... perhaps once this is done? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nacho Wolf Posted July 9, 2010 Share Posted July 9, 2010 Nice update and that quote about coming out of the womb with a stein and so on (brilliant entrance) was by Lord Ragnarok I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirax Posted July 9, 2010 Author Share Posted July 9, 2010 Cheers, although this isn't the FULL update, but it is the teaser. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaplain-Skylax Posted July 9, 2010 Share Posted July 9, 2010 Update!!!!!! I Want an Update!!! Brilliant story so far brother Skirax. The 300 references are...Subtle to say the least :cuss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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