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The Time of Ending (Chapter Nineteen up)


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Malice is an entity worshipped as the Renegade God of Chaos and Hierarch of Anarchy and Terror. The Renegade Chapter Sons of Malice are among his followers. Malice is apparently based on Malal, a minor Chaos God that represents Chaos turned upon itself. Malal was absent from the most recent editions of Warhammer publications for copyright reasons.
From Lexicanum. He's a minor Chaos God.

its action packed ! B) the two chapters are good but there is no link from the first to the second...... i think maybe a shift of divine power as Khorne was killed to the remaning gods increasing their powers so then you could even include the necron gods tearing through warp rifts affecting the real worlds as the emperor is off doing his Chaos head hunting :D

heh sorry got carried away there good stuff tho is there any more ready yet ? ;)

Sorry to burst your bubble, but the story is moving too fast. There is no development, it is just, the Emperor killed a chaos god, then another, then another. Take a look @ the Imperial Fist's Great Crusade one, it is long, detailed and doesn't move at the speed of light. You just need to slow it down more, and fill it out.

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