Kelborn Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Welcome on board, Drak! Now that's timing. No need to worry. We won't bombe you with requests. You'll just have to do one portrait each day for the beginning. When this is done and we like your work, you'll do the whole art for our first book. Two days should be enough. It's just painting, aye? Just kidding. ;) Glad having you on board. :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360830 Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Drakzilla~ Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Well, I can totally do one per day. Of course they will be in my signature post-modernist style, in which each Primarch is represented by a blank canvas :P Anyways, I am glad to be here, and excited to be working on this project! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360855 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Captain Redd Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Aye! Welcome to our humble universe it's good to have you aboard. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360856 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedDragon Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Having followed this from the start, I'd love to help contribute. Is it too late for me to join the project with a Legion of my own? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360864 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Having followed this from the start, I'd love to help contribute. Is it too late for me to join the project with a Legion of my own? sadly yes. However you can join the clouncil of Terra or help with one of the other factions, or just help out in general Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360910 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlphariusOmegon108 Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Well, I can totally do one per day. Of course they will be in my signature post-modernist style, in which each Primarch is represented by a blank canvas Anyways, I am glad to be here, and excited to be working on this project! welcome! And great to have more people on board, I am sure your artistic expertise can be of great use in this project Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360915 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 RedDragon, don't worry. There is enough space for each of us. I wanted to join as well with my legion. Now I'm working on Knight Houses. :) Would that be of your interest? Could do it together if you want as I'm currently prioritizing my own chapter and will afterwords return to them. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360920 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 We have a whole universe to write upon. So feel free. And welcome RedDragon;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360931 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 There might be one more box for the Scions info, though I need to run it by Slips first. And welcome Drak :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360950 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Ok. So this should be complete. If you could just quickly look through it before you post it anywhere to make sure I've not made any glaring errors. Especially Mikhal I'd like your opinion on whether the silver is easier to read as if it is I'll start changing the text in the other documents over to this instead. I've also tried to maximise the size of the text to fill the spaces available to aid reading. But that is why the text isn't the same size across the legion descriptions. https://www.dropbox.com/s/wm1l68l56tfa8bc/BotL%20Showcase.pdf?dl=0 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4360998 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Regarding the symbol you gave them, the Drowned are full traitors, not Reformists. Also, you've kept the [?] on the WoP allegiance. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361007 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Thanks for that. I've fixed both those issues and updated the link. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Noticed the "coNgnomen" typo hasn't been fixed in the first three legions. Scions infobox, "loses" -> "losses" Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361037 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Hey ho. It is a big improvement with the silver font. Easier to read. Different font sizes in the same article is usually a no go, but here with different length there is no choice. Of course we could fix that by writing all descriptions with exactly the same word count^^ But that would be too much. That fits. Also the space between the edges. Looks good. So should I post it then? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361039 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Fixed those too :P And I'd wait a couple of hours probably, Mikhal. We're still finding a few errors. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361042 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Just made a couple of minor adjustments to text size so we now have less small text in the legion descriptions. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361050 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 The last bit for the Scions is in their thread now. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Ok. I've done a more critical read through of the document and fixed some errors I found. I'm having a bit of trouble with the first sentence of the Ghost Walkers (Legion 20) though. I'm not too sure what it is trying to say but it doesn't read right to me, maybe one of you will have a bit more success teasing out the meaning. New Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/wm1l68l56tfa8bc/BotL%20Showcase.pdf?dl=0 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361075 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Maybe something like: "The choleric Grave Stalkers are one of the most feared legions as utter destruction followa in their steps" or something like that. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361093 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Ghost Walkers. But I won't hold it against you... much :P Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361114 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Updated. Hopefully that is the last of them. https://www.dropbox.com/s/wm1l68l56tfa8bc/BotL%20Showcase.pdf?dl=0 Have to say I'm pretty pleased with how it looks and that we've managed to get so much information into quite a small space. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361137 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Oh damn. ... Those names... And it looks superb Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361154 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nomus Sardauk Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 It looks fantastic, very professional indeed! Now, not to be "that guy" but I did spot three typos that need correcting. The first is in the Galaxy Is Blood And Fire section, second paragraph, bottom line: "servents" should be spelt "servants" The second is in the Warbringers blurb, in the third line "Build on top of this inherent sense of superiority". That should be "Built" in past tense, rather than "Build." The third is in the Eagle Warriors blurb, in the sentence: "Military efficiency is no virtue to the Eagle Warriors, who do everything the can to sate the bloodlust of their Primarch." The "y" is missing from the end of "they." Also, one last thing I need to check, aren't the Iron Bears supposed to have bronze arms, minus the shoulder pads? Or does it vary depending on the marine? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361249 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 Can't wait to read it in the evening. By now, it looks soooo good. :) Somerimes a like says more than thousand words. ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361259 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted April 11, 2016 Share Posted April 11, 2016 No. Please feel free to be that guy. Every mistake that we correct now makes it that much better. I've just fixed the typos and see that I did screw up the Iron Bears scheme (totally my fault). Just going about fixing that now, the link should go to the updated doc in about 15-20 mins. EDIT: Thing went quicker than I hoped. All updated now. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/321121-recruitment-advertisement-artist-thread/page/7/#findComment-4361264 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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