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[DW] Blackthorn and Swordhand: OOC Thread

Commissar Molotov

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Good stuff methinks Noctus :smile.:

 

@Steel, good grief lad, let the fellow get his feet under the table! :sweat:

 

MR.

 

 

Never! :biggrin.:

 

@Noctus, seriously though, it was a good read, I am very much looking forward to reading more by you!

Noctus Cornix Venerable Brother

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No problem Noctus, it was a great read none the less, just a couple of points I noticed:

 

We don't have an Iron Warrior, we've got an Iron hand.:biggrin.:

 

You also missed Tyber, a Dragon of Caliban.:happy.:

 

Oh.... Whoops. Let me just fix that.. :blush.:

 

Failed the test anyway... Soo not much that needed to be changed.

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I've got to say, I do like the Iron Warriors, they are my favorite clearly disloyal legion. :yes:

 

And to be honest, I think it'd would be priceless to have an IW Black Shield with us, just to watch the rockcreat fly between them and the IF decedents.:laugh.:

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Meanwhile, me, Imperial Fists player, being surrounded by all you HERETICS

 

Am not, I'm just ambiguous as a Dark Angels player.... the way I wish that they had left the legion and the Lion...

 

Yeah but the Iron Warriors though???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:P

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Meanwhile, me, Imperial Fists player, being surrounded by all you HERETICS

 

Am not, I'm just ambiguous as a Dark Angels player.... the way I wish that they had left the legion and the Lion...

 

Yeah but the Iron Warriors though???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:tongue.:

 

 

 

They were unfairly punished with a duty best left to the Imperial Army, garrison duty... Besides I really like the book "Storm of Iron".

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Really good post, Noctus. Just as a note, Apologist's Yeng has already introduced you. Can I suggest you delete the introduction of the rest of the members and leave just the sentence introducing you?
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Update up. I think once Slips has given a more detailed introduction and informed Swordhand of what Blackthorn have been through, the floor can open up and anyone can post.
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Really good post, Noctus. Just as a note, Apologist's Yeng has already introduced you. Can I suggest you delete the introduction of the rest of the members and leave just the sentence introducing you?

 

Ahh... Sure did. I edited it. 

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I apologize for making you gentlemen wait on me. 

 

I had some... unexpected family complications and the last few days became a bit hectic. I will also admit I keep pressuring myself into thinking that I need to write way more than what might be necessary, so I continually psyche myself out when I think my writing isn't good enough or not long enough.

 

I will endeavor to correct this in the future. 

Sorry to hear that, Noctus; hope things are on the mend. For what it's worth, I think it's a great post; I like the nods to the past, which makes for good worldbuilding. :)

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...and an update to take us from airfield to manse. 

 

Sorry if it's a silly question, but is it the done thing to go over things that have just happened (as in my recent update) to provide my character's reaction, or should posts generally press ahead in terms of action?

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Both are fine on my end, especially as they help to give your character's distinct impression. I've edited my prior post to flow a little more with yours and to allow Mazer to reply before Slips brings the Kill-Teams back together.
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Well Tyber is now rethinking his choice to try and talk to Ghent. :biggrin.:

 

Still Ghent ranks a bit better on first impressions than Varvost has, even with after nearly a month spent together the two of them seem to be coming to some understanding with each other now.:yes:

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