The Castigators

[sgtNACHO]

Pandora doesn't seem like such a viscious or evil name.

 

If I remember correctly, Pandora wasn't evil and she only opened the box due to her extreme curiosity. Thus letting all the evils of the world free and trapping hope inside.

 

So a Hive Fleet with the name Pandora sounds wierd, they accidentally rampaged and destroyed thousands of Imperial worlds?

 

Perhaps that monster from the oddysey? The one on the rocks that swooped its head down and ate his sailor guys? Can't remember the name srry :D

 

Or perhaps Hive Fleet Sangheli (the Covenant name for Elites, I know your not supposed to, but its a very distant relationship, also Elites are scary enough, now imagine them Tyranidified! ^_^

[Commissar Molotov]

Damn.

 

I had a very long response ready and then it got swallowed by the internet. I'll be back a bit later. Thanks for the comments, everybody - when I'm on a better connection I'll try to resolve things!

[Marshal Rohr]

That's it! Hive Fleet Internet, swallower of worlds.

[sgtNACHO]

That's it! Hive Fleet Internet, swallower of worlds.

 

I almost did FOMCL when I heard that.

 

:mellow: :P :lol: :P

 

Fear the Hive Fleet Internet, swallower of important documents!

[Donkey Kong]

Pandora doesn't seem like such a viscious or evil name.

 

If I remember correctly, Pandora wasn't evil and she only opened the box due to her extreme curiosity. Thus letting all the evils of the world free and trapping hope inside.

 

So a Hive Fleet with the name Pandora sounds wierd, they accidentally rampaged and destroyed thousands of Imperial worlds?

 

Perhaps that monster from the oddysey? The one on the rocks that swooped its head down and ate his sailor guys? Can't remember the name srry :(

 

Or perhaps Hive Fleet Sangheli (the Covenant name for Elites, I know your not supposed to, but its a very distant relationship, also Elites are scary enough, now imagine them Tyranidified! :)

 

Scilla was the six headed monster which ate Odysseus' men in the Odyssey. However, I think Charybdis, the whirlpool which ate everything and regurgitated it a dozen or so hours later, would be an interesting name.

 

If you don't mind me throwing in my pennies, personally I think naming them after Halo Elites is rather clumsy.

[Tyrannicide]

However, I think Charybdis, the whirlpool which ate everything and regurgitated it a dozen or so hours later would be an interesting name.

I really like that and I think it sounds cool enough; Hive Fleet Charybdis. What do you make of all this hive fleet naming madness, Molly?

[sgtNACHO]

Yeah Charybdis, sounds good cause it eats and regurgitates :) I couldn't remember what it was about other then a big whirlpool.

 

Like I said I just threw the Sanghelli idea out there cause i couldn't think of anything else :)

[Donkey Kong]

Karybdis and Charybdis are one in the same, and the name of the Iron Snakes fortress-monastery was news to me.

 

Argus was also Odysseus's dog renown for his patience, twenty years on a pile of crap waiting for Odysseus to return home just to keel over and die. So, I don't think that Hive Fleet "Patient" is all that hot.

[Marshal Rohr]

Well from the Castigator POV, a Hive Fleet that keels over wouldn't be so bad. ;)

 

Carybdis would be an OK, but I don't like the Iron Snakes parallel. Argus and Echnida also sound good.

[Tyrannicide]

Typhon would be another option if you didn't mind it being Typhus's original name. He was the largest and ugliest of the monsters and had 100 serpent heads. Or maybe Argus, the monster with 100 eyes?

I thought of suggesting Typhon too, but it solely reminds me of Typhus's original name so it wasn't as appealing as the other choices out there.

[Sigismund Himself]

You don't want a Hive Fleet Echidna, believe me :huh: Any Australian will have a good laugh at it :)

 

Hive fleet Echidna? More information here. Not the best choice of name for a hive fleet.

[Tyrannicide]

You don't want a Hive Fleet Echidna, believe me :) Any Australian will have a good laugh at it ;)

 

Hive fleet Echidna? More information here. Not the best choice of name for a hive fleet.

I wouldn't want to mess with one, that's for sure. It looks dangerous enough, where's the harm in that? ;)

[Marshal Rohr]

Gah! Its terrifying!

[Nash Trickster]

I'll have to join the "name throwing bandwagon":

 

What about the name of one of the Harpies? The screaming Harpies would fit better with the Howling Stars IMO :D

And Harpies and 'nids have a few common themes... Harpies were sent by Zeus to punish Phineas for his bad use of his talent of prophecy and "steal the food out of his hands before he could ever eat". The "unnamed" Harpies in several myths are likened to locusts, leaving nothing in their wake...

 

There is three named Harpies: Aello ("Squall"), who is also called Nicothoe ("Fleet of Foot"!), Ocypete ("Fast Flying") and Podarge ("Light Footed"), who is also called Celaeno ("Dark")...

 

I really like Nicothoe myself. Ok, it's not that "frightening" as a name, but the "hidden pun" is too good to pass :)

[Hasoroth]

Hive Fleet Nihlathak, named after the necromancer in D2 who gave Baal the key to the Worldstone. I liked the sound of that name (Arreat is a good one too imo, the mountain where the Worldstone was hidden)

[Commissar Molotov]

Wow, I wasn't expecting things to get quite this busy! Thank you in advance to everyone for their contributions. :)

 

 

 

 

 

The Doldrums scene from Master and Commander comes to mind.

 

A very interesting comparison. Especially because I wasn't planning it on a useful time-taking measure. Rather, I planned for Caphius and his company litereally to be stranded on the warp-tides, not unlike what happened to Mortarion and his men. Something that's always interested me about Space Combat with the Astartes is that they're effectively impotent; almost all of their enhancements are rendered null and void as they're forced to just become observers to the action. Equally, putting Caphius in a situation where he can't fight his way out strikes me as being very interesting from a psychological point of view.

 

 

Now that I have all of my resources (minus Codexes) I will try to resume work on the third company fluff. Specifcally Sirius' actions against the Tyranids. To start I have one question: Have we come up with a name for the Tyranid Menace in the Howling Stars? I was thinking Hive Fleet Ammit, the Egyptian personification of Divine Retribution. Or since I belive it was decided to be a Kraken Splinter, Hive Fleet Hydra impliing again multiple tendrils but instead of them being led by lesser creatures they are led by Hive Tyrants, again alluding to the fact the each of the Hydra's head was intelligent and independent.

 

Glad to hear you'll be working on the Third Company. I wasn't expecting this talk of Tyranids to accelerate quite to the point I've found it at this morning! First off, to be clear, we have a Splinter Fleet, rather than a Hive Fleet. Ignoring the pre-Behemoth fleets (Colossus, et al), we have Behemoth, Kraken, Leviathan and Jormugandr. Aside from Behemoth, they're all classic mythic sea-serpents - which is quite fitting, really. As such, if possible, I'd like a name somewhat similar. I've considered Nautilus, Coelacanth (also the name of a tank in X-Com: Terror from the Deep) and Triton as being suitably maritime names but none of them have really fit thus far.

 

The other thing to mention is that the Tyranids aren't actually assailing the Howling Stars just yet (though the Third Company has uprooted a number of genestealer infestations throughout the region.) Rather, the Tyranids are presenting a large enough threat for the Third to engage them.

 

It's always possible that if the splinter fleet represents a fragmentary piece of a once much larger fleet that it could receive a numerical designation by the tacticians. You could then have something like "Splinter Fleet A-000/1 "Hydra", or the like... once we finally settle upon a suitable name, of course!

 

Still, the name isn't THAT vital - and I'd like to avoid this thread becoming consumed by Tyranids. Focus on what's relevant to the Castigators, for now.

 

 

I especially like your second idea of naming the bulk of the Tyranid splinter fleet, though the name 'Hydra' seems a bit basic.

 

I can agree that the name is a bit simplistic, but it works. My concern is that it's an obvious and common name that's likely been used before. If nothing else, don't forget that the Hydra is a symbol associated with the Alpha Legion. (The idea of an Alpha Legionnaire in a Hormagaunt costume doesn't bear thinking about!

 

Is there another name thats more Latinized? I would go with something like that.

 

I'd like to stay away from latin names, as it almost always sounds clumsy when people try to shove extra latin into the 40k universe - in their Chapter names, for example. I personally don't like 'Jormungandr' as a name that much, as it's the first official hive fleet to break away from the classic Greco-Roman mythological base.

 

 

I'm not too sure, I'd have to look into it further. That said I had an idea playing off of the Hydra route of the Hive fleet's name, that it is a tendril of the original fleet. We could always use the idea of Cerberus, the multi-headed dog which guarded the gates of Hades, to prevent those who crossed the river Styx from ever escaping. (Taken from Greek and Roman mythology) We could somehow replace the river Styx with a counterpart in the 40k galaxy. Perhaps the Castigators themselves and other defenders of the Howling Stars could be seen as a Cerberus-like figure, guarding the Imperium against the Tyranid menace and the hive mind.

 

Therefore Imperial scholars have named the fleet 'Cerberus' in recognition of the hive fleet's identity and threat to the Imperium. The one thing I do like more about Hydra is that it seems to be a more vile and offensive creature, when compared to the three-headed watchdog. Either way it isn't too much of a problem. :)

 

Of course you need to remember that the 40k universe is a bizarrely paradoxical one. Names like 'Leviathan' or 'Hades' can be thrown around with inpunity, but the Imperium knows nothing of Ancient Greece. It would be awkward to say that they named the fleet X because of the myth of Y; do you see what I mean? I do, though, like your idea of a Stygian analogy. It makes me think of the area in the Star Trek universe known as the Badlands. It's certainly food for thought.

 

eh mate that the symbol for starcrafts own sons of korhal

can't you find a differen't symboleif you don't belive me fallow link

http://starcraft.wikia.com/wiki/Sons_of_Korhal

 

I wish someone had told me that back in 2004! :rolleyes:

 

But no, seriously. A lot of people have commented regarding the Castigators' chapter symbol, which is indeed based heavily on that of the Sons of Korhal, from Blizzard Entertainment's Starcraft series. The symbol was chosen after I had framed up the majority of ideas for the Castigators, and seemed to fit perfectly with the concepts of punishment that I'd come up with.

 

 

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z121/mnesimache/Castigators/Castikorhal.png

 

The badge used by the Castigators was redesigned by Cpt. Tiberius, and it is functionally different from that of the Sons of Korhal - you can see that the layout of the arm and the length of the whip are both different.

 

 

 

After Caphius's first mission to search for survivors from the Black Consuls. He began to question the actions of his parent chapter and his homeworld beliefs. He went to the chapel to reflect and found himself standing before a statue of Lycidius. His reflection took him back to the time of his service with the Librarium. That his when his path and obsession with Lycidius started. He might have asked the chaplains for the Hero's Mantle and was told that he could only have it when Lycidius himself found Caphius worthy. So Caphius takes the 2nd on a crusade to prove his worthiness, while studying on info on Lycidius molding himself to try to become Lycidius's heir. Maybe taking the crusade along the path of worlds that Lycidius himself went.

 

What do you think?

 

Have you played any games with your gaming group lately? How have the 5th company faired in battle? I see that now you might want to map the Howling Stars?

 

Darth and Marshal2, What about using the name of the mother of all monsters? I can't remember the name, but it was the creature that gave birth to all monsters that plagued mankind.

 

I'm a bit dubious about the Mantle for now, and as such I'd suggest just leaving it and focusing on more pressing things. After all, we don't know entirely how Lycidius died so it's possible Caphius could've found it. I need to give the idea some thought.

 

Aside from that, I'd say that his obsession with Lycidius probably started even before he became a Captain - that was my thought, anyway. It might've been what started him on his course to become a Commander,to emulate his idol.

 

As for the Howling Stars - yes, but not obsessively. I don't want to get caught up in detail, because that'd be troublesome in the extreme. I've named some of the systems in the Stars, but I wouldn't go as far as to name every single system. It's not like the Anargo project!

 

This is one of the best IA's on the B&C, the only one that's better would have to be SCC's Brazen Claws. And they're a GW chapter, so they have SOME pre-established fluff. I really want my DIY renegades to reach this level. The Liber Traitoris is somewhat lacking. <_<

 

You've also taught me this: Drawing Space Marines is one thing. Drawing them well is something entirely different. Did you draw Ancient Rhetoricus and the Chaplain or did somebody else? 'Cos if you did, they're both amazing :woot: .

 

Thanks, Argon. SCC's article was one of my inspirations when writing IA: Castigators, so I suppose I can't begrudge coming second to it. ;) I'd be curious how you feel that the Brazen Claws are better, though. Is it some thematic issue? Something wrong with my IA article? I'm always keen to improve!

 

Rhetoricus and the Chaplain were both drawn by Cpt. Tiberius. You can see more of his artwork over on the ORDO ILLUMINATUS website.

 

 

That's it! Hive Fleet Internet, swallower of worlds.

 

The blue screen of doom is a fearsome thing! Guard your machine spirits!

 

 

What do you make of all this hive fleet naming madness, Molly?

 

Well, as said before I'd be pretty glad if we could turn it down a notch and return to the Astartes! I'm glad for all the interest and activity that it's drawn, but equally I don't want the moderati drawn down on me because of all your enthusiasm. ;)

[Marshal Rohr]

Some ideas about Sirius that I had kicking around:

-As a relative 'moderate', he would be more inclined to lend a hand to situations where other's would scoff and walk away. Note: He isnt humanitarian, but the third might participate in things like pirate interdiction or eradicating feral Orks. Would this tread on the 5th's role though as the Marcher Lords?

-He had a kind of 'come to the Emperor' experience in some conflict. Maybe when he faced his first real action against the Tyranids, as opposed to the 'fox hunt' of hunting down Genestealer Infestations.

-He was kind of Caphius' yes man in his younger years, but now he has grown to be a voice of reason to Caphius more hair-brained ideas.

-He never served in the first company, having been promoted directly from Senior Sergeant to Captain of the 9th where he served for a short three years before being selected to replace the third company commander.

-He has a nemesis, I havn't really thought of a good one though.

-He is more cordial with other Astartes Chapters, but is reluctant to serve under another that is not of his chapter, so much so he avoids more domineering Chapters.

-He is diplomatic in showing that the Castigator are the real muscle in the Howling Stars, and he knows how to use intimidation instead of eradication to keep a populace inline. For example: he would make a big show of hunting down a pirate group or rebel cell on a planet, using very showy means of destruction, like Lance Strikes and Thunderhawk deployments (flying in over capitols and such). Going to meet the local governor from a Drop Pod :tu: .

-The third is frequently deployed spending far more time aboard their vessels than at the Chapter Monastery. Sirius hands off approach to being Master of the Arsenal has made the techmarines warm up to him.

 

 

My dad and I had an interesting discussion about Chapters whose mission is to guard a region of space (Ultramarines), as opposed to acting as a QRF (Raven Guard) or pacification force (Black Templars). He thinks that Chapters like the Ultramarines, Iron Snakes, and Castigators would be more ambassadorial in their approach to the worlds they protect. They would care about the territory and take measure to let the humans on those worlds know that they are under their protection, like the Iron Snakes having a protocol to contact them in case of emergency or Ultramar having inspections from Marneus. That is what makes me think the Castigators would have factions within the Chapter who care about letting the worlds of the Howling Stars know who it is that protects them, as well a factions who would remain aloof and stand offish. In the Third Sergeant Solemnas would be one of the aloof faction and Sirius is one of the diplomatic faction.

 

Also, I have come up with some names for squad II, V, and VI

Squad II (Tactical) 'the Sentinels': Veteran Sergeant Deiad

-name given for being the protectors of XXXXXX Shrine

Squad V (Tactical) 'the Swords': Veteran Sergeant Barrus

-name given for captain Sirius' reliance on them during battle as his 'Sheild'

Squad VI (Tactical) 'the Sheilds': Veteran Sergeant Hiberus

-name given for Captain Sirius' reliance on the during battle as his sword

 

I wanted to have two tactical squads that Sirius would use for their teamwork when he needed to devote a full two squads to a task. As such to make the connection stronger Sergeant Barrus and Sergeant Hiberus came up from noviciacy together. Their solidarity is reknowned and when it came time for Sirius to select replacements for two sergeants who had bee killed, they were his first and only choice. The names for V and VI are WIP, but I like the Sentinels alot.

 

Godslayer was a Sergeant in the company, sergeant Patronus. He was Senior Sergeant of the company.

 

Chaplain Argentus is a fiery zealot, a master orator and a thorn in Sirius' side. The working relationship is cordial, but Argentus takes the 'smash' approach to warfare. Even so far as on occasion, when caught up in the fervor of combat, to lose control and decide for himself what his next target will be; causing other units to have to cover down. He is fond of Sergeant Solemnas, who he sees a s a kindred spirit. He was recently promoted up from a reserve company. He fights almost exclusively jump pack equipped unless the mission cannot support it (such as in a space ship). He is armed with the Crozius 'Punisher' and the Plasma Pistol 'Traitors End', awarded to him by Sirius upon his elevation to the third company.

 

Lexicanium Liciunus is a quiet reserved warrior who focuses on the lores of defense. He has spent his time in service to the Librarium studying the way of the great siegemasters and when Sirius has walls that need be taken, Licinus is given complete tactical control to devise a strategy. He wears a robe of Cream over his blue armor and wields the power sword 'Hand of Ares'.

 

Senior Sergeant Tarandas is Sirius most loyal Sergeant. He is ever at Sirius side and fulfills his duties as the companies second with modesty. He considers himself Sirius bodyguard, and on the feild of battle f Sirius accompanies his command element he takes great care keep Sirius from harm. Much to the Captains chagrin. He is armed with the power sword 'Amicus'.

 

Apothecary Gratus is cynical and morbid. He has an unhealthy fascination with death and if it were possible for a marine to be depressed, the Gratus would be depressed. He is an exceptional marksman wielding his plasma pistol to devastating effect on the battlefield. He rarely participates in company activities (when they have them) preferring to spend his time in the Librarium amongst the Medicae texts. Even with an uncomfortable personality, he is an admirable healer who was tutored by none other than the chief apothecary.

 

All ideas are WIP, let me know what you think.

[Ferrus Manus]

I'm going through the process of updating my notes on the Eighth and Tigris. I think I remember discussing the idea that Tigris maybe older than we originally suggested. So I'm working with that and putting more detail into the company itself, I'll chat with you on messanger as soon as I have something substantial to show you.

[Tyrannicide]

I could sit here for a while responding to everything you said M2C but that would just be a waste of time. I really do like all the ideas you've generated, but as you said, the names for squads V and VI have got to go. I do however like the name 'Sentinels', it's a very nice choice. ^_^

 

By the way, if you want to discuss anything regarding the third company with me just say so.

 

EDIT:

Senior Sergeant Tarandas is Sirius most loyal Sergeant. He is ever at Sirius side and fulfills his duties as the companies second with modesty. He considers himself Sirius bodyguard, and on the feild of battle f Sirius accompanies his command element he takes great care keep Sirius from harm. Much to the Captains chagrin. He is armed with the power sword 'Amicus'.

It's not a problem at all if you want to stick with what you've got, but I pictured Tarandas with the Lightbringers only power fist. Just thought I'd mention it.

[Marshal Rohr]

Gah! I am out of Non-Templar Power Fists! Ok file time...

[Ferrus Manus]

Mol, did you ever manage to finalise a list of Titles for each of the Captains?

[Commissar Molotov]

Some ideas about Sirius that I had kicking around:

-As a relative 'moderate', he would be more inclined to lend a hand to situations where other's would scoff and walk away. Note: He isnt humanitarian, but the third might participate in things like pirate interdiction or eradicating feral Orks. Would this tread on the 5th's role though as the Marcher Lords?

-He had a kind of 'come to the Emperor' experience in some conflict. Maybe when he faced his first real action against the Tyranids, as opposed to the 'fox hunt' of hunting down Genestealer Infestations.

-He was kind of Caphius' yes man in his younger years, but now he has grown to be a voice of reason to Caphius more hair-brained ideas.

-He never served in the first company, having been promoted directly from Senior Sergeant to Captain of the 9th where he served for a short three years before being selected to replace the third company commander.

-He has a nemesis, I havn't really thought of a good one though.

-He is more cordial with other Astartes Chapters, but is reluctant to serve under another that is not of his chapter, so much so he avoids more domineering Chapters.

-He is diplomatic in showing that the Castigator are the real muscle in the Howling Stars, and he knows how to use intimidation instead of eradication to keep a populace inline. For example: he would make a big show of hunting down a pirate group or rebel cell on a planet, using very showy means of destruction, like Lance Strikes and Thunderhawk deployments (flying in over capitols and such). Going to meet the local governor from a Drop Pod :) .

-The third is frequently deployed spending far more time aboard their vessels than at the Chapter Monastery. Sirius hands off approach to being Master of the Arsenal has made the techmarines warm up to him.

 

Interesting thoughts.

 

With regards to Sirius being a "relative moderate" - I'm not so sure. I'd still put him on the scale as being conservative. His views are certainly more moderate than those of Caphius, but he would be notably more zealous than Anteas. My intention with Sirius was always that he has mollified in his old age (whilst Caphius has become more entrenched.)

 

With that said, we can't apply the terms "moderate" and "zealot" in a satisfactory way. It's possible that Sirius would agree with certain things and not with others - we can't say that "all zealots think X".

 

I see nothing wrong with the pirate interdiction and the like - the Howling Stars tend to attract such threats, so I imagine all the Castigators would have experience with it at various times. It's possible the Master of the Marches would simply coordinate such actions.

 

I don't want Sirius to be Tyranid-centric; he's certainly no Cassius. But I think that perhaps he simply views them as a serious threat that has to be eliminated. Obviously the Tyranids haven't encroached so close that the entire Chapter has had to fight them - it's likely that Sirius has been taking the fight to the Splinter Fleets as they've approached the Howling Stars. Likely he's had to coordinate with others - the Imperial Guard, perhaps other Chapters (though I've never really detailed any other Chapters as being near the Stars). As I can't see a Captain bouncing from one problem to the other I have to consider that there was likely a post-Kraken Splinter (c.994.M41) and then perhaps another in c.997. The fluff on post-Behemoth splinters is incredibly contradictory, but we know that Sirius uprooted a number of Tyranid cults since he became Captain in 845.M41.

 

I'd be interested in you defining his relationship with Caphius. I certainly never would've considered him a 'yes-man'; he has conviction enough of his own. Of course, those of Caphius's ilk would likely consider him to be "going soft", relaxing his stance in recent times.

 

I'd omit the 'never served in the first Company...' section, as it doesn't add anything, and it's not entirely clear as to whether Veteran Sergeants are obligated to have served in the First. Plus, you seem to suggest he's never served in a Battle-Company, which is worrying! I'd just eliminate it because it creates more problems than it solves.

 

Why the "Hands Off" role? It strikes me as odd for him to shirk his duty.

 

My dad and I had an interesting discussion about Chapters whose mission is to guard a region of space (Ultramarines), as opposed to acting as a QRF (Raven Guard) or pacification force (Black Templars). He thinks that Chapters like the Ultramarines, Iron Snakes, and Castigators would be more ambassadorial in their approach to the worlds they protect. They would care about the territory and take measure to let the humans on those worlds know that they are under their protection, like the Iron Snakes having a protocol to contact them in case of emergency or Ultramar having inspections from Marneus. That is what makes me think the Castigators would have factions within the Chapter who care about letting the worlds of the Howling Stars know who it is that protects them, as well a factions who would remain aloof and stand offish. In the Third Sergeant Solemnas would be one of the aloof faction and Sirius is one of the diplomatic faction.

 

It's an interesting viewpoint. The Iron Snakes and the Reef Stars are perhaps a better analogy than the Ultramarines, as the Castigators don't actually rule the Howling Stars. They've just made it their business to safeguard the Stars, and have over the millennia been intertwined into the sector. For example, the small colony-world of Aeteron Point was saved by Captain Lycidius from Dark Eldar pirate raids that could've entirely depopulated the planet. It's now, millennia later, a bustling port and a valuable world in the Stars. All down to the Castigators. I can imagine that protocols to call the Castigators likely do exist, and there are probably blood-oaths set down that ensure the Castigators will come when they are needed.

 

When it comes to the defence of the Howling Stars, I can't see the Chapter being as ideologically fractured as on other issues. Anteas and Caphius fought side-by-side on Maethax, for example, even if things were strained at the time. Caphius orchestrated the defence of Mutara and there would've been Marines that disagreed with him serving side-by-side. So I guess I'm asking you to advance your argument and convince me otherwise!

 

Also, I have come up with some names for squad II, V, and VI

Squad II (Tactical) 'the Sentinels': Veteran Sergeant Deiad

-name given for being the protectors of XXXXXX Shrine

Squad V (Tactical) 'the Swords': Veteran Sergeant Barrus

-name given for captain Sirius' reliance on them during battle as his 'Sheild'

Squad VI (Tactical) 'the Sheilds': Veteran Sergeant Hiberus

-name given for Captain Sirius' reliance on the during battle as his sword

 

I like 'The Sentinels'. I also like your fluff regarding Sergeants Barrus and Hiberus. With that said, I can't say I like their squad-names! I make no bones about it, squad names are incredibly difficult to get right, so don't feel too bad. I like the either/or relationship they've got going, though.

 

Two quick notes - Licinus would be a Codicier, and he would wear a yellow robe, as per Codex dictates.

 

Wouldn't all Apothecaries be tutored by the Apothecary Primus? Especially in a Chapter like the Castigators, who place such great emphasis on the preservation of their gene-seed?

 

I'm going through the process of updating my notes on the Eighth and Tigris. I think I remember discussing the idea that Tigris maybe older than we originally suggested. So I'm working with that and putting more detail into the company itself, I'll chat with you on messanger as soon as I have something substantial to show you.

 

B)

 

It's not a problem at all if you want to stick with what you've got, but I pictured Tarandas with the Lightbringers only power fist. Just thought I'd mention it.

 

I would think that Power Weapons would be a fair deal more common than that, especially in the Master of the Arsenal's Company!

 

 

Mol, did you ever manage to finalise a list of Titles for each of the Captains?

 

No. Of course they maintain the codex titles for the most part, but I'd like to come up with additional ones at some stage.

[Tyrannicide]

I would think that Power Weapons would be a fair deal more common than that, especially in the Master of the Arsenal's Company!

Do you have to be right all the time? B) I hadn't even considered that the third is still led by the Master of the Arsenal. That said, then yeah I'm sure they would have a couple more to lend. I originally liked the fact that Tarandas wielded a giant, deadly power fist on his arm.

[Commissar Molotov]

I actually originally meant "... more power fists than that..." after you said he had the only fist in the Company.

 

 

Oops!

[Argon]

This is one of the best IA's on the B&C, the only one that's better would have to be SCC's Brazen Claws. And they're a GW chapter, so they have SOME pre-established fluff. I really want my DIY renegades to reach this level. The Liber Traitoris is somewhat lacking. <_<

 

You've also taught me this: Drawing Space Marines is one thing. Drawing them well is something entirely different. Did you draw Ancient Rhetoricus and the Chaplain or did somebody else? 'Cos if you did, they're both amazing :woot: .

 

Thanks, Argon. SCC's article was one of my inspirations when writing IA: Castigators, so I suppose I can't begrudge coming second to it. ;) I'd be curious how you feel that the Brazen Claws are better, though. Is it some thematic issue? Something wrong with my IA article? I'm always keen to improve!

 

Rhetoricus and the Chaplain were both drawn by Cpt. Tiberius. You can see more of his artwork over on the ORDO ILLUMINATUS website.

 

Don't get me wrong, nothing's really wrong with yours. It's just that the Brazen Claws come off as being slighly more detailed. That, and like I said, they're a GW Chapter, so some of the things like gene-seed were already in place like gene-seed. You came up with every detail yourself.