Raktra Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 Maybe for the Raktea fact put Raktra AND his Legion? Otherwise I’m happy as a clam. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973342 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 Thorn, I did tweak Icarion's entry, but I'm afraid of adding too much detail that might take away from future videos. That said, who else thinks we should include psyker/pariah designations and loyalties in the Insurrection? Mikhal, I used meditation for the Warriors of Peace. Do you have another fact I could use? Kel, I reworded 'jungle homeworld' to 'homeworld's jungles', better? Raktra, I added 'and Legion'. Good? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973352 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raktra Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 All good. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973362 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 :tu: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973363 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 (edited) Easy, in order to control their pariah nature they wear special masks to focus their ability. Or something like that. Although the battle meditstion was mine!!!!! Another thing: yesterday we discussed that Gwal should lose an arm on the siege of terra. Talonair suggested that he then get Morros artifical arm the Abyssi prepared for him. I like the idea that he loses the arm in the fight against Raktra. So seeing their bad odds, Gwal tries to soul suck Raktra like he did with Traviyai but Raktra is too close and ripps Gwals arm out before the power can manifest or so. I would sacrifice both arms but then Gwal.couldn't help Hec anymore. What do you guys think? Edited January 3, 2018 by MikhalLeNoir Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973414 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 I went back and gave meditation to the WoL, while I changed the WoP one to something more unique. I like it, Mikhal, especially since it is Gwal who cuts off Morro's hand in the first place. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973520 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Perils Posted January 3, 2018 Share Posted January 3, 2018 Thorn, I did tweak Icarion's entry, but I'm afraid of adding too much detail that might take away from future videos. Yep, I think it makes him stand out from "average joe the Primarch" now :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4973542 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 In which case, Mikhal, could you submit this list of facts and see what OneMindSyndicate thinks? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4974406 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 I will Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4974532 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raktra Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Easy, in order to control their pariah nature they wear special masks to focus their ability. Or something like that. Although the battle meditstion was mine!!!!! Another thing: yesterday we discussed that Gwal should lose an arm on the siege of terra. Talonair suggested that he then get Morros artifical arm the Abyssi prepared for him. I like the idea that he loses the arm in the fight against Raktra. So seeing their bad odds, Gwal tries to soul suck Raktra like he did with Traviyai but Raktra is too close and ripps Gwals arm out before the power can manifest or so. I would sacrifice both arms but then Gwal.couldn't help Hec anymore. What do you guys think? Nah, cut ‘em both off, nut hiiim! It does make sense to FINALLY show a Daemon Primarch doing something to a mortal one, I don’t think GW have presented something like that yet? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4974740 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 (edited) Poor Gwal. Travier pierces through his lungs and Gwal loses 1/both arms. Amd no, canon dprimarchs seem kinda foolish On a sidenote: OMS received the facts and I bombarded him with Artworks. Hope i didn't miss one. Edited January 5, 2018 by MikhalLeNoir Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4974953 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Easy, in order to control their pariah nature they wear special masks to focus their ability. Or something like that. Although the battle meditstion was mine!!!!! Another thing: yesterday we discussed that Gwal should lose an arm on the siege of terra. Talonair suggested that he then get Morros artifical arm the Abyssi prepared for him. I like the idea that he loses the arm in the fight against Raktra. So seeing their bad odds, Gwal tries to soul suck Raktra like he did with Traviyai but Raktra is too close and ripps Gwals arm out before the power can manifest or so. I would sacrifice both arms but then Gwal.couldn't help Hec anymore. What do you guys think? Nah, cut ‘em both off, nut hiiim! It does make sense to FINALLY show a Daemon Primarch doing something to a mortal one, I don’t think GW have presented something like that yet? Fulgrim vs Guiliman? Depicted in Dark Imperium, happening during the Scouring. Horus vs Russ in the coming novel of which I forgot the name Horus vs Sanguinius I avoid listing Curze as he was no daemon primarch when he kicked some loyalists butts like that of Dorn. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975049 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted January 5, 2018 Author Share Posted January 5, 2018 I'm gonna pop this here because of an interesting issue it raises about Achilles. To whit, he is meant to be portrayed with an "irreducible otherness". Sounds like a good guideline for writing Primarchs. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975200 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowSwordmaster Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Hello Everyone. I was directed here by Mikhal to help out on this grand project that everyone on this board is working on. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975281 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Hello Everyone. I was directed here by Mikhal to help out on this grand project that everyone on this board is working on. Good to meet you, Shadow, and glad to have you aboard. How will you be helping us out? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975370 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowSwordmaster Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Hello Everyone. I was directed here by Mikhal to help out on this grand project that everyone on this board is working on. Good to meet you, Shadow, and glad to have you aboard. How will you be helping us out? I'm a good writer of both fiction or history, so if you need another writer I would be good there. I'm not good at doing art, which I have a tough time with. Anything else besides art I would be okay with. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Hello Everyone. I was directed here by Mikhal to help out on this grand project that everyone on this board is working on. Good to meet you, Shadow, and glad to have you aboard. How will you be helping us out? I'm a good writer of both fiction or history, so if you need another writer I would be good there. I'm not good at doing art, which I have a tough time with. Anything else besides art I would be okay with. We could always use more writers. Right now, we have two main areas for writers to work in. One, the rulebooks. We need help writing campaigns and lore that fits in the style that FW uses. The other is stories. Anything that you'd see in the novels is things we'd like to see here. Do you have a preference? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975464 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowSwordmaster Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Hello Everyone. I was directed here by Mikhal to help out on this grand project that everyone on this board is working on. Good to meet you, Shadow, and glad to have you aboard. How will you be helping us out? I'm a good writer of both fiction or history, so if you need another writer I would be good there. I'm not good at doing art, which I have a tough time with. Anything else besides art I would be okay with. We could always use more writers. Right now, we have two main areas for writers to work in. One, the rulebooks. We need help writing campaigns and lore that fits in the style that FW uses. The other is stories. Anything that you'd see in the novels is things we'd like to see here. Do you have a preference? I can work with rulebooks. Although, I am no Alan Bligh. How many writers do you have on the rulebooks? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Three "permanent" writers. Myself, simison and bluntblade Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975520 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 (edited) Current objective is the Book 1 campaigns Edited January 6, 2018 by simison Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975521 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Current objective is the Book 1 campaigns Although, those are fairly well covered. You're rewriting Madrigal Purge, I'm doing Untara and blunt is going over Kataii Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975523 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowSwordmaster Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Sounds like everything is almost covered. Should I just assist the other writers then? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975529 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Sounds like everything is almost covered. Should I just assist the other writers then? Let's see, that leaves two options. You can either help out anyone who needs help writing their Legion fluff chapters or you can break ground with the Mechanicum Civil War campaign in Book 2A. ShadowSwordmaster 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975530 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowSwordmaster Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 (edited) I can help with anyone who needs help with the legion fluff chapters. That sounds like something I can do. Edited January 6, 2018 by ShadowSwordmaster Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975535 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 Okay, we have several members who need help last I checked. Kelborn could use some assistance with his Predators. San has run afoul on technical difficulties and needs some help getting the Steel Legion back on track. Squig was making slow but periodical progress with his Dune Serpents. Mikhal has just put out a new version of fluff for his Wardens of Light and has been asking for feedback. Those are the four that I remember reviewing in the last few months. There are other Legions that aren't finished, but who's creator wasn't actively working on them recently, including the Warriors of Peace and the Fire Keepers, owned by Drakzilla and Demus, respectively. The Eagle Warriors have a new steward, and Riku might want some help. That about covers it. Plenty of opportunity. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/329759-general-discussion-secundus/page/111/#findComment-4975537 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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